The Cuckold Diet Challenge Ch. 08

mainly I liked it. If you take requests for finishing stories then pls finish neighbor chronicles chapter 11 is in need of a chapter 12 lol

What dumbass his wife cheater always cheater you reap what you sow, rick is cruel n asshole but him have common sense, this really hurt fact his wife always denied. Great work... Damn ass big dick ruins everythig hahhahh

I disagree with TrainerOfBimbos; the author spent the previous chapters planting the seeds that showed that the anger was always there, and that any slippage in the wrong direction was going to end the marriage. Putting the cameras back in was a smart move by a guy who had showed himself to be well-prepared. The rest was just straight-forward reaction to what the wife did. I could see the situation with Shelly going either way; he showed restraint with her. 5**

I loved this part, and was surprised that Shelly didn't use a cast iron frying pan on Dani when they were beating each other up to make it look like Rick did it to them. I thought it was funny as hell, and all of it caught on camera. Of course she got hooked on big cocks, and being treated like a complete slut. She was tired of being a good upstanding wife who really didn't have to work for a living being a volunteer. She quickly learned the difference from working part time to working 12 hour days. I thought the end was a little rushed, but for the most part everything that needed to be said was already said. Plus it was more of a quick wrap up of the story after the divorce happened. Thanks for fixing a really lame story with a much better version of it, even if it took you quite a few chapters to do it. I personally liked the wife getting the "high octane" food while him and the twins got the low cal stuff. Add in all of the "chips" that he earned being used on other women really had to get the wife's goat. Thanks for sharing it with us, I really enjoyed your part of the story, and give it a 10 for both the writing and the imagination to make it all work out like it did. Great work.

Good ending but predictable 5*****

That ending... wow. Honestly, it reads like satire. I mean, I don't mind it going in the BTB direction at all, but it was so abrupt considering the 2-3 chapters that preceded it and unlike the previous chapters, it was just chocked wall to wall with LW tropes and cliches. Honestly, I'm just going to try and forget about the ending because it was so unsatisfactory.

Relationship & behaviors are just too wobbly in this story.

Hahaha god damnit I knew how this was going to end but I convinced myself I would be in for a surprise

I liked this story until the "she is mistreated used as a piece of meat and loves it, is instantly changed and can't get enough of being treated that way" As soon as I see this I know it's just some dudes kink wish.

This story took 7 chapters to put this silly sinario out! As soon as they never went to counseling I should have known it was the simple "kink" story.

For those who do not know, the author "FinisTheDamStory" has been past away for some time now. I l9ve reading his stories. You may not like the characters and their actions, but the story flow and character insight are bar none. Their are a lot of good writers on this sight, but very few deliver such fascinating stories that other writers fail to realize from their own works. I encourage you the review his works, and then go back to the original stories and enjoy the magic that this wonderful soul brought to this platform.

Wind bag.

Lame. Although you've got talent, your MCs typically are passive-aggressive hypocrites. It's a shame most of your hijacked stories follow the same path.

It is clear that you can write. What is baffling is why do you choose to write such garbage and why must you make all your characters deplorable with no redeeming qualities what so ever.

"Why did you have to ruin me? I did not deserve it" said the whore that humiliated, belittled and sexually abused him, not to mention cheated on her husband. If a man were to squeeze some precum and wipe it on the upper lip of a woman or a man that would be sexual harassment, but when she does it and sufferes the consequences "she didn't do anything to deserve being ruined".

This all points to one simple conclusion, the author has subscribbed to the philosophy of the famous cum sucker Wimpy Cuckistan, the original cuck, and is doing his very best to proove that he is the biggest cuck in history. That or the biggest feminazi in history.

Either way, it is clear the author is devoid of common sense and even the faintest notions of morality, equality and justice.

All of this is reflected in almost every aspect of the story. Even the parts where the mc seemingly grows a backbone read more like "ha, i'll prove her i'm strong! I know the perfect revenge on both of them! I'll get on my knees, unbuckle his pants, suck the bulls cock and after he cums in my mouth i'll look them straight in the eye and spit the cum in a napkin! I won't swallow! That will absolutelly ruin them! I am the wisest strongest man imaginable!".

This is my second read through. Still a 1 star for me, especially this last chapter. Yes the wife did something despicable and yes the husband deserved some bit of revenge yada yada. I just never enjoy a story where the MC ends up being just as big a piece of shit, or in this case a way bigger piece of shit than anyone else. Also this last chapter I feel like the writer just ran out of ideas or was bored with this story. Such a shit ending for what was presented in previous chapters. The ending made absolutely no sense for what everyone went through, to just toss it all away on some way out there turn of events. After reading this a second time I went back to all the previous chapters I had given better marks to and changed them to 1 star.

Scorched earth is not my typical response, but the cheating slut didn't get her due

Well done.

I love that Dani's heel turn was foreshadowed in the early chapters. Dani could be over-the-top, unreasonable and demanding, she shows us this in the infamous contract. What a crazy response to a husband cheating once with a hooker. Then, Dani was on tape wanting and seriously enjoying what Meat had to offer, and she and Shelly lied, so that she could get some strange (some big) again. This was while Rick was helping Shelly and trying to get along with Dani. She got mad that the boy-toys were run out of town, instead of being humble and contrite and realizing that that was probably for the best. Then she lied over and over, saying she never wanted to hurt him, she did not want big meat, etc., when she absolutely wanted both. She lied to herself and to Rick, or, only to Rick, but she lied, and then pursued what she wanted eventually. She "only" had Meat three more times after the reconciliation was well under way. What a turn. The fake assault was almost over-the-top, but so was the first contract. Dani had promised to ruin him at that point. Making the battery charge work might ruin Rick without necessarily revealing Dani's sluttery, if she could shame him about it.

It seems a shame that her heel turn came so late in the game, but I think that reveals that she was lying to herself AND to Rick about her sexual desires. The content of the DVDs were not burned into her brain in the same way that they were burned into Rick's. She lived the pleasure, but that memory faded as the cost became apparent. Rick's nightmare was harder to forget, it WAS the cost, it was the burn he felt.

Rick was no angel either. His sins are apparent, and his revenge was also tough on the intended target. It is important that he held onto his sense of self enough that he was calm when it came time to end things. He stood and made things go the way he needed them to go.

I enjoyed reading this long attempt at a resolution that became a dissolution. Five for you.

Oof. This story started out strong then got worse and worse. Angela was right, Rick was a total fucking asshole too and no one called him on it. And Dani's heel turn at the end is ridiculous. It's like you were building towards reconciliation and suddenly decided you had to have a reason to burn her. Just disappointing.

yikes!!!!!!!! wayy too much of the same old crap telling a very common story.

Please Lit writers who read this - longer is definately not necessarily better!

Who cares about Dani?……Shelly was the top fuck and got along with all size dicks! Women orgasm solely from clitoral stimulation working with mental arousal. Most accomplished ‘stick men’ wield Normal …around 6 inch tools that are usually around 2 inches in diameter…..and just under 6 inches in circumference. That size tool can be put wherever the owner wants it. Did you ever hear of a woman giving birth having an orgasm. The lesson?……learn how to use the paint brush to paint a masterpiece. Brooms won’t work very well. Size queens mostly populate sites like LITEROTICA. R. H.

Oh well. I was hoping they'd make it.

FANTASTIC STORY!!!!!

The husband had an irrational amount of tolerance for his wife's abhorrent behavior. Her third time with "Meat" should have killed things. Completely. What did her gain by delaying things? Would have been similar outcomes regarding custody and assets. She woukd try to scorch earth him. He had the videos. He might have lost his senior partnership. But there was no way to know that if he wanted that there would be the attempted abuse claim. He already had time to shift his assets around including the educational trust. What Dani did was so repulsive. And so far over the top. Delaying things didn't help anything. And probably made things more acrimonious. On a separate note, the "cosmic" sex with the 12 inch endowed Meat is a stupid trope. Large scale studies of sexually active women show that while size does matter, too much is also not a good thing. 45% of women in the study (subjectivel) assert they have had at least one well endowed experience with a 10 inch or large penis and of those more than 40% were not satisfied or did not enjoy it with pain being the leading reason why. Note most of those 45% of women in the study size of 1400 women, almost certainly did not have sex with such larger endowed partners. Why? Statistics. The odds of a man having a 10 inch penis are like 1 in 100,000 to 1 in a million. Forget the 12 inch LW trope. So there is a clear bias that the larger a penis, the even larger yet again that the women inflate the penis size. So a 10 inch monster becomes a 12 inch freak of nature. A 9 inch penis becomes 10.5 inches. And so forth. Therr are.not enough men alive and sexually active with 10 inch or longer cocks to service 40+% of women even once. Hence the strong subjective bias. Other findings from the same study show the Goldilocks region for maximal satisfaction is 6 to 8 inches which is certainly higher than the 5 1-5.5 inches of an average penis. Furthermore, over 50% of women claim that they wil nit be maximally satisfied with a 9 inch cock, rapidly increasing to 90% at 12 inches (which again besides a dildo, how would they know for sure?). Finally less than 3% been a 11 inch or 12 inch cock to be fully satisfied. So apparently slut Dani fell into that 3% category. Bit surprising given that so MANY LW stories on this site feature mega cocks and the cheating wives who once they get a taste, become addicted. Heck it sounds like once Meat came back, Dani was banging him regularly (how did she defeat the GPS tracking?) like several times a week for the last 4-5 weeks. She was the LW prototypical big cock junkie who destroyed her marriage and her family life. Ironically those cocks don't exist with enough frequency to support these common occurrences in these stories. And even if they do only a tiny fraction of women want sex with such well endowed men to be fully satisfied, and the vast majority fear it and of those who claim to have experienced it, almost 50% did not enjoy it. So yeah the LW trope about big cock addiction is alive and well...but utterly ludicrous. At least he ends up with Jenny. Crazy story of patience and forbearance that ended in shit. Dani is a delusional btich with big cock syndrome. Somehow one time.ruins her forever snd she can't help herself. Whatever.

I have to say... you could've posted this as chapter two or three, and NOTHING of the story would've been lost. I'm serious.

his bs meter was better than mine well done

I read this long repetitive story because I like the way you usually portray the wronged men as men rather than indecisive wimps. I was greatly disappointed in this man's whishy washy mindset. His wife threw him away and he kept giving her chance after chance when he knew in his heart she was lost to him.

i want to make clear that my 1 star is because the author turned from backbone to the classic "cuckfagshit". The rest of the story is about a guy that thinks he has a backbone but has none, he's a wimpy cuck and deserved every painful and hurtful think that was thrust upon him. He was yellow through and through, piss drinking yellow that is. And you, well, your comment says alot about you.

I want to be clear that my 1 star is only for this chapter. The rest of the story is fantastic! I just don't understand why the author had to tack on this chapter which does not really work with the rest of the story and is just kind of a BTB ending.

To be fair, the author has been telegraphing for the last couple chapters that something does not jibe. The explanations given by Danielle and Shelly as to the third time Danielle cuckolded Rick make little sense (We already had the appointment and just went ahead with it, but did not humiliate you or make you watch once we figured out we were wrong about you wanting to be a willing cuckold-- so no biggie---WTF!!!). The fact that Rick eventually gave up asking about the real reasons for the third encounter could be seen as a sign of his healthy recovery from his trauma (and perhaps PTSD) - he no longer needs all the answers and is willing to reconcile without them. His recovery is far from complete--he still tracks Danielle obsessively--but progressing.

i can see one other purpose to the ending. At the end, Rick has no choice but to face up to his own SPH and feelings of inadequacy. At least in Daniella's case, the comfort offered to Rick that size does not matter is once again ripped away. That he is able to accept himself and move on is perhaps the greatest evidence that he has finally healed and come to terms with what was done to him. Danielle talks like she has a mental breakdown at the end, and we recognize with Rick that her size obsession is her problem, not Rick's. Comfort to all of us (the vast majority) without 12 inch cocks.

Yet it is almost like someone convinced the author that he had not made Danielle and Meat suffer enough for their sins, so he came up with this. The brutal attack on Meat is beyond even Rick in the rest of the story and the device the author uses to let Rick remain "innocent" of it is not very convincing.

Up to now, the third encounter is the only hint we have that Danielle is a size queen. It undermines the story's conceit that all this pain is the result of s tragic mistake that must be forgiven, if it can never fully be forgotten.

Some of the commentators have complained about the length and repetitiveness of the story as a whole. I think this misses an important point about this genre. This is, until the last chapter, a well told and carefully planned story that has a lot of psychological insight, despite some somewhat contrived sex scenes used to deliver major revelations. It is after all also fetish erotica. One aspect of the unwilling cuckold/cheating wife genre is the readers desire to experience Rick's trauma/humiliation/anger again and again. That can make the story repetitive and at times make it seem like the the same points are revisited over and over, and that the main character is trapped and unable to move forward. At times, if the reader is actually looking for an eventual reconciliation ( after the cheaters have done their penance), the cuckold's anger may even make one cringe. I could do without all the "slut" and "whore" language; it is not necessary in order to feel Rick's pain and humiliation and makes me cringe a bit. Yet, I suspect that the constant revisiting of trauma anger and and the same issues over and over again is probably something who have had a spouse cheat on then actually experience. Rick is beyond humiliated and angry; I think he is probably suffering from PTSD. But I think that the critics who have focused on the repetitiveness are missing the fact this is not the author's failure, but a fairly standard feature of this type of genre fiction.

Personally, I do not read these stories primarily for the BTB element. The pain and trauma and penance is a fetish element, but I like best those where the characters try to find a way back to each other and overcome the betrayal. That is ultimately why I loved this story, but was disappointed by the last chapter.

Nevertheless, let me empadize once more--Great story, just one bad chapter.

Wonderful story until the last chapter, when it just goes off the rails completely. It could be shorter, but was good u til yjis point

I gotta tell ya...I was grooving on this story, but found myself getting bored a few chapters in. So much so, that I just read the chapter summaries, then came here to read the comments in order to figure out what happened.

There just seemed to be a whole whole lot of spinning wheels here, without getting any where.

Fred Brown that was hilarious! It was a little long for what we got from the story. But I like the highlights.

Stupid me, I had the impression that "legal eagle" types had something on the ball but In this case, we have two that shouldn't be let out at night without adult supervision.

Try as I might I can't give this sad tale more than three stars ........

So much for second chances. Second chances just gives a person that treated you horrible another shot at doing it all over it again. Trust is relying on the integrity or ability of another person. Your ability to truly trust someone is based on their character, not yours. Trust is earned, not freely given. If you blindly give your trust without first having confirmation on a persons character or integrity you're just setting yourself up. As Dr House use to say, "everyone lies".

Figured Danielle would never be able to give up her desire for "big" cocks. Letting Shelly back into her life was a big mistake if she was serious about saving her marriage. Guess now we know she wasn't serious about staying faithful. It was about her getting her big piece of "cake" and having it too. Offering up Shelly wasn't much of a consolation prize to her husband. Why stay with one cheating slut just because she offers you another slut. Not when there's hot, young and very fit Jenny who wants him. If you have to get rid of a cheating older wife so much better when the replacement is younger, fitter, prettier and faithful. Nice twist having Danielle be the fat one now over weight by 60 plus pounds at the end. If she wants to continue to pursue "big" cocks she'll have to find a big cock guy that's into plus size women.

Well written , but he should have divorced her in chapter 2.

He's still a cuckold. How can you still love someone who is willing to do such horrid things to you? Plus he only turned her down AFTER she cheated again. A wimp, a loser, a waste of time.

Mr. fragility finally got what he wanted. How pathetic. lol

Ugh. Just simply ugh. Bloated, vapid, repetitive, back and forth. Dumb decisions all around. The night mythical 12 inch penis trope (that would be less than 1 in million odds without some surgery). The wife who experienced it once cannot stop lying and is addicted. All the cuckold crap. Revenge nonsense. Just uggh. 1/5.

This may be the ultimate "make a silk purse out of a sow's ear" story. The original was a bit stomach churning and FTDS took on a huge challenge to finish/change it to make it pretty satisfying. I think other commenters are right: it could have been shorter, BUT FTDS is such a good writer that I enjoy his long meanderings.

We all know FTDS is no longer with us and everyone surely misses his great efforts. Thanks, FTDS. Tanglosax

good story - well written tx

Good god! FinishTheDamnStory should have taken the advice of his nomdeplume and done some serious editing of this bloated epic. His writing is generally good but this was just set-indulgently long! And shame on him breaking it up into a series rather than just chapters leading the reader into part after part. Call the damn thing a novel and be honest with the potential reader.

Well written, it too long. Last 2 chapters could have been edited more carefully (Tina became Teri, etc). Think counseling should have been added into the attempted reconciliation mix. However, the videos of Danielle were really too graphic, and emotionally hurtful to overcome. There needed to be some better "time events" to indicate the passage of time. Was Rick out of his job for 3 months?

Jenny's moving in and subsequent marriage and child could have been expanded.

All-in-all, a satisfying ending to the original story.

mfj

Definitely up there with the worst on this site.

This should have ended 3-4 chapters ago.

If I nursed my drinks like this I could make my first shot last an entire night.

Martian Slut Ray, Part MMDMLXII

Who was John? And when did Tina become Teri?

I have been reading a lot of Lit stories since Covid gave me time to do it.

In the hundreds of stories I've read, I cannot think of a character I hate more than the self-centered asshole Rick. I felt bad for him in the first few chapters, let him have his time to figure out what he felt and what he was going to do. Even though he hired a whore instead of talking with his wife. His hands weren't clean, either. But after the effort he made to make everyone's life miserable who was in his universe, I was rooting at the end for him to get hit by a truck in a crosswalk and be a quadriplegic. He just wanted to drag down everyone around him instead of what he did.

Fuck Rick in the ass.

Oh, and 5 stars to the author that made me get so pissed off at an imaginary character.

That's good writing.

Daniella really went off the deep end which was surprising. Excellent story, I couldn't see him staying with either.

ok story,but way to drawn out,so much so lost lost track of it, you made it clear he warned both of them if they screwed him over again he would destroy them,you also made sure we knew that he had set things up that she would get little or nothing from the marriage and what was with 'John'. Funny way to destroy her/them by paying bail to get them out and handing over$400,000 plus bonuses for doing exactly what he said he would destroy them for. Hell i'd cheat for that kind of punishment. Suggestion, keep the story short so you do not lose track of what you where setting up earlier for in the story..

Other than being way too long,the characters were memorable in this sometimes sleazy story. Rick was a dick! High-powered lawyer? Your sister’s ass! As soon as the cunt wife threatened him with her bullshit ultimatum,he should have shut her down and drop-kicked her to the curb.

I worked out the details, and at 9:12 am the following morning, I had two beautiful, haggard, lingerie clad, repentant women in my car, and I was $10,000 poorer, after paying their bond

…that …there is what an honest cuckold wimp looks and behaves like!!

This was a great ending to a decent story, but he gave her more chances than I could have.

Went too soft on her (no pun intended) at the end. His wife deserved the nuclear package. Yes he cheated first, and she had the right to retaliation. But he was discreet, she wasn't. But then I'd never agree to that contract to begin with...

Way to long! If you were to consolidate all of the whining about “she lied to me” and “she humiliated me” and “she made me clean her up afterwards “ and “what about the third time” down, this sequel could have been 2 chapters shorter. Started off really strong, ended with a whimper. A man that was that angry and pissed off would have never let her off that easy. Or her shitty friends.

PS - who the fuck is John?!?

I believe that for Daniele to fal again she must have a chemical imbalance like manic depression. It could be viewed that what my wife did was quite similar, and I am pretty sure she was manic. This was over at least a 3year period and I was quite unaware.

The ending didn't make me happy. But I guess, that's life

Brilliant! Possibly your best effort. The longest, for sure. Five stars seems so inadequate.

I wasn't into the first couple of chapters, don't like cuckolding. I decided to stay with it and kept reading. Story got interesting and I had to keep reading. Danielle was a piece of work. Kind of hard to feel sorry for her. I believe in second chances but she had so many more. Good last chapter. gave it a 5*

DG Hear

Danielle was one dumb bitch, her mate Shelly not much better.

They deserved what they got in the end.

Just too damned stupid frothier own good.

The big dick trope is just so well used these days.

Why would anyone fuck over their entire LIFE for a fuck with a big dick.

Only happens in Lit. That’s for sure.

Great story, the first on Literotica to make me take stock of my life and want to be healthier. So, thank you for finishing the damn story, though I am still feeling queezy about the whole thing.

Also, skruff101 - you are absolutely right about false statements, however, in most states it is not a crime at the investigatory level and the primary prosecution would be regarding the false accusations (which need a complaining/damaged party). Given the state of the court and penal system, a plea deal would almost certainly be reached. In the case that you are dealing with lawyers at two prominent law firms (at least one of which does criminal defense), it would be in the interest of the prosecutor's office and the specific prosecutor to allow a settlement on the issue as it would be a waste of public resources since the injured party seemingly would line up in support of the defense.

liked it, but I would not have done that ending. I would have had Rick & Tom have Meat killed, and then Rick and Dani stay together, but Rick saying whenever Dani needed to get stretched, Rick should be there, and gets to watch. No humilation or put down downs though. Some of us little dick guys really DO like to watch, and don't mind sharing, but we don't want to be disrespected or made fun of. Cuckolding can work with the disrespecting

Danielle proved, once again, she's a lawyer, but really nothing but a whore. Hope she finds something big enough to literally tear her apart, and maybe make her push up daisies... Rick could have hired her out and made a fortune. It would be good to see her seriously torn up, with the impossibility of getting better. Suffer bitch, you can't suffer enough.

One of the best “loving wives “ stories ever 5 Star effort!

Well I'm only 8 years late, but yeah, I liked this. Thanks for finishing out a story that kept on the ridiculous but at least emotionally consistent side of things.

Worth the read, I didn't hate everyone, and I felt like justice was served. Thanks for the good read.

Not being from the US I’m unsure how the law works there, but she made false statements to the authorities, once that happened it should have been out of his control.

Conspiracy to pervert the course of justice I would imagine be dealt with quite severely, he could have no influence on the consequences of that.

Masterpiece of art!!!!!! CONGRATULATIONS for this EXCELLENT work!!!!!!!

Finally

She couldn't do it. Afterall her promises of reconcilliation, all that she was going to do to get back tp normal, she spread her legs again for the big dick. She was just a lying, cheating, hypocritical piece of cheating cunt shit. Great ending.

best ending of all

I enjoyed/loved every damn word! I wasn't able to finish the entire writing last evening & had a bear cat of a time remembering where your writings were located!! Ha! Good ending, I enjoyed the fact that a man came out on top. I'm on my 2nd marriage, unfortunately I was not in a position to hire P.I. S' to track my 1st wife nor the funds. I read about your author & that you are/were the ghost writer, sometimes. Hopefully, you'll strike out on your own to more excellent writings! I do agree with other comments that "Rick" after the wife's 1st sex session he should have kicked her to the curb. Thank again, Karl

The problem is, she really got by with her slutting around and really didnt pay for it other then a divorce. And frankly that should have been expected.

The husband was written as far to wimpy.

No real life man would have even lasted after the first time.

This is one of my favorite stories. It has some holes but in the main, holds together very well. Read it numerous times, which is a sign to me of a very good and satisfying story. Wish FTDS had not retired. 5 stars.

Wimpy.....

No revenge for multiple and repeated betrayal, humiliation, blackmailing and criminal conspiracy

Still drown in whore's fake love

Fairly content w/ the story as put forth by FTDS, generally like and approve of his work. That said, I would really like to be able to talk to women who had experienced a multitude of dicks especially several w/ some big dicks, whatever size that might be. I expect a big dick will feel different than anything average but is it/ are they as wonderful and addictive as all these LW stories make them out to be. Women losing their rationality and intelligence(limited as that is) at the sight or especially after experiencing a big dick seems very far fetched. I do personally know of one marriage that broke up cuz the husband spent the minimum amount of time foreplaying(eating out)the wife before inserting his so called big dick into his wife and raming(my word)her until he came, then rolling off satisfied he'd done her good and pleasurably. He'd frequently bragged about his dick size(i was roommate) but i'd never seen him erect, BUT his wife complained about painful sex, unsatisfying sex(no orgasms of any sort), awfully fast sex, nothing good about any of the sex, and finally, she had a one night stand rubbed in her husbands face to force a divorce just to get free from either his self-centered sex or his big dick. She claimed that his attitude seemed to be that his dicksize would provide all the pleasure she needed. So I'd like another female opinion.

You guys love writing tales about size queens.

All a fallacy.

I enjoyed the story, it had a bit of everything, just how I like them.

Scores 5/5, well done.

He never should have given the slut a second chance!!!!

I can buy the Dani from the original story doing this, but the one from the last 7 parts who'd been desperately trying to atone and fix her marriage falling off the wagon at the drop of a hat feels pretty weak. Probably a better ending than reconciliation for the angsty Rick, but it felt railroaded by egregious stupidity. Especially the attempts at framing him for battery, those came across as the actions of replacement characters. Bit of a blasé end for something that was stretched out so long. Good in the middle, though.

I’m sorry loved the story but she need to burn just a bit more in the end. She was truly not a very good person at all. Shelley she needed some fear too.

Yes I like others are wondering who John was, but I have a theory. It was that guy she ended up working for. The way she got that nice job, and the long hours she was doing to start with...working on the weekends? Yeah that's when I knew where this was going.

But yeah, he was harping about it a loooong time before he finally ended things, but he was right that what she did the second and third time proved their marriage was over. He was being waaaay more generous than I think most of us would have been given the situation.

I do get that being a senior partner and all, he had to keep things on the dl, so that explains some of his reluctance, considering the fortune he'd be making. I honestly think he should have gone nuclear when she finally came back round to what the cheating whores always say: "don't or you'll lose everything". Yeah it always comes to that. She never really blamed herself for what happened, despite what she claimed, and she would not have hesitated to f*ck him in the ass hard in the divorce if she could have despite her supposed "guilt" and supposedly still "loving" him.

I realize this is just a story, but we all know Women tend to be that way, especially where divorce is concerned. That's why I know I'm slightly sexist in my thinking at times. I'm a lot better than many guys, especially users on this site, but knowing how divorces are, having experienced a broken home myself, It's hard to be charitable toward Women when they think they still have a right to screw the Husband either when he didn't cheat or when she cheats. That's what I would call a double standard.

But yeah, I like the general direction you took this story, better than the original which I couldn't even read through all the way, so thanks for saving this story it was a rollercoaster from start to finish; And thanks for not letting us down in the end.

Who the fuck is John, and why didn't Danielle want them to mention him?

"I'll always love you, Danielle."

Why do you insist on putting stuff like that into your stories?

Boy, sure took a long time to get his head straight.

great finish to a good story. 5 stars

gamblnluck

Who the f*** was JOHN?

If anyone deserved the Mexican whore house future it’s her

that tried to set you up? I mean really, they plan to put you in jail and the fact that he gave a damn about either of those slut is stupid to me.

Why would you pretend to fix another writer's story only to fuck it up? The guy who wrote the original story is a cuckold and you pretended to fix his story only to let us down at the end. After everything Danielle did she needed to burn at the end of the story, not have a little remorse and nostalgia about the past. You call that justice? Actually your story was more offensive than the original. You're treating your readers and fans very badly. I may decide to start writing myself and posting my stories here and teach you how to satisfy your audience. Here's a little example of what your audience was expecting from you:

Epilogue:

Three years had passed since Danielle's last encounter with Meat. There are some things in life which completely change a person's life and behavior in a fundamental way. Danielle no longer worked and Rick being the man he was paid for all of Danielle's needs. He was supportive, kind and generous to her. He also brought the kids to see their mother at least once a week. Shelly visited Danielle as often as she could and their friendship was stronger than ever. Danielle no longer had any trouble losing weight. In fact she beat any record set by Rick in the past. Danielle no longer felt the need for a big cock or great sex or any kind of sex for that matter. She had finally understood how to appreciate the important things in life. Unfortunately sometimes bad things need to happen to a person for them to become a better person and Danielle knew that life had given her every opportunity to change her ways and she had wasted them all.

For the last two years Danielle had been in bed having contracted HIV from Meat. She had dropped to 98 pounds and was barely able to move around her apartment by herself because she was too weak to do so. Looking at her face was like looking at death itself. She had a green hue to her skin and had lost most of her hair. She knew that at this stage of her illness she only had a few months to live. She also knew that she had brought her present situation upon herself. Now at the end she was finally able to be honest to herself and to others. She no longer had the time for lies.

Shelly blamed herself for indirectly having killed her friend and destroyed her marriage and her life. Danielle told her friend that it was not her fault and that she had finally learned to take responsibility for her actions.

Danielle died on a February afternoon after two years of battling her illness. Everyone cried once she was gone but at the same time they were glad that she was at peace and not suffering any more. Watching her body deteriorate as her illness advanced slowly had been hard on everyone and they were all glad that this poor soul who had made so many mistakes and caused so much suffering as well as happiness was finally at rest. We all make mistakes in life and we have to live with the consequences of our actions. The important thing to remember is that when you make a mistake and life gives you another chance you shouldn't waste that chance.

Thanks for sharing. 5 stars

How you turned a detestable if we'll written short and turned it into a long winding roller coaster of a story. Wish it had ended differently , but Danielle was not quite honest through out the story. And certainly not in the original. You did such a good job of reconstruction I was almost rooting for a reconciliation. Hope you haven't stopped writing.

Perfect save for making Rick a real man!!! Glad for BTB at the end.

Boy you really let the train go off the tracks in the last chapter. It went right over the cliff ending up with a score of 1. What a waste of time reading it.

I'm pissed that, after six epic chapters, you decided to BTB. The Dani in your last chapter was a slut and a shadow of the woman in your story. You really burned her by letting her eat herself to obesity. The follow up with Meat was unforgivable. The child with Jenny was out of character for Rick.

Who was John? Wasn't it Tina, not Teri, who was watching the twins?

But the "big cock" trope is overused and ridiculous. Leaving aside the fags who fetishize size, the only normal men who fixate on the alleged magical qualities of a big cock are guys who don't have one. If they did, they would know that the premise regarding Danielle's cheating is bullshit.

I have been working on a story for Months .. Then I read a Story By This Author and I have to Start Over again .. I had only One question .. I thought the 2 kids mentioned a Guy named John ?? Maybe i was My Mistake ..

Swing back and forth about wore me out

What Dani did, including especially the attempt to frame the husband for felony assault, would, in the real world, result in absolutely no sympathy - no bailing out of jail or dropping charges. He didn't need her signature to get a favorable divorce. Moreover, how could HE drop charges? Her felonies included making false police reports, possibly perjury if she made a sworn statement, etc. These are crimes against the criminal justice system that a DA would have to take seriously.

This is a very well laid out and significant treatise on the workings of marriage....while not at all a fan of cuckold stories...this was handled extremely well. My kudos to the excellent author of this situation.

This was one of the best reads that I have come across for a while. I also agree with '49greg' in that the story stacks up well against many published 'erotica'. While I do not like 'cuckhold' tales this was excellent in keeping me the reader engaged and wanting to know the outcomes of the reconciliation, even though this eventually did not happen. Excellent FTDS 5* plus

and he should have divorced her at the very start. But then as I read chapter after chapter I think I caught on to the timeline only being six weeks and then some short time afterwards. It had felt like he hung in there for months and months and years.

I've read worse in published books that I paid for. Much worse.

I didn't look at it as a sex story, but just a good chunk of fiction. Although I've known people in real life, men and women, who repeatedly pulled dumb stunts like Dannielle and Shelly did, lie about it and never take responsibility for it.

I assume he and Jenny ended up together then.

After all the stunts Danni and Shelly pulled, I wouldn't want to have anything or anything i cared about near them. Everything they did, was just a little mistake. Every female acted like it was 90% his fault, and maybe 10% theirs. It made me want to puke, I guess lawyers have got the stomach for it, I know I don't.

He promised Danielle scorched earth payback if she plays again, however let both whores easy. For once wanted to see full retribution.

But man, how I loathe Danielle and her little coven!

No one finished like FTDS. We have so many stories that need decent endings. Hopefully a new team will come along to take up the mantle. Until then, I'll just keep reading the old masters.

Superbly deep and revealing! Putting thinking with one's cock or cunt aside, this is the bottom line of cuckolding and femdom powertrips. As a loving fetish where love and respect are the emphasis... different story. Add humiliation....

The saying 'once you go black you never go back' just is a wobbly premise as you never CAN go back; we can not unring the bell, can not unfeel experience and can not ignore that everything has a pricetag attached to it. An apt description of cuckold and sizequeen and their predictability. Pridefulness, greed, and selfentitlement collide with decency and human nature :)

I guess I didn't understand why Danielle had Shelly beat her? She was right. She was the Mother. The Court would have given her the house, the kids, child support and alimony. Half their investments and half his retirement. Why be stupid? Sending him to hail and ruining his career simply lessens the amount of money she gets. Good until the bad ending.

It appears that Tina's husband was so upset with her that he had her change her name from Tina to Teri. As long as this was and we never found out how Danielle ever found out about Rick's escort affair in Boston. Far too long, far too repetitive for high marks. Danielle never took responsibility for her excessive revenge.

Enjoyed the pace and the characters. Not sure what so many have complained about ... "no one would be so stupid" ... "I can't believe a character would do .." People, it's a story, complete with characters that are not perfect. Ergo the the interest. Imagine a story where everyone did exactly the right thing .... boring. Good job all.

Saw the ending coming from chapter 5. Screwing Shelley seemed contradictory to his attitude at the time, didn't add to the story except length.

I doubt anyone would have stayed that long.

The shock at first I could see him agreeing.

But by #2 and certainly #3, he had to know the marriage was dead.

Uncertain why the story continued afterwards.

Normally FTDS stories are very good but this was far too long.The ending was obvious and the story could have been told in half the words.

I read a page or two to my wife most evenings before bed. Do to the length of this storie, it took over a week to get through it. It sparked many colourful conversations, even bordering on arguing. But my wife insisted I keep going and we both agreed it was a good story. Apparently the diet works, I lost 6 pounds while reading it!

An FTDS story I did not like. Writing was great as usual.

In the end the protagonist was weak. His wife, besides being a cheating slut, conspired to send him to prison. And he gives almost $400, 000??

No way.

He promised to do ber dirty and he absolutely did not. If any LW Wife every needed a BTB ending this one did. Yet for his tough talk he did........nothing.

An extremely well written, interesting and convoluted story of two not particularly likeable people systematically destroying their marriage by making one stupid mistake after another.

Both seem to display a weakness for overkill, hypocrisy and penis envy, and probably should have stayed together if only to avoid the prospect of them being inflicted on anyone else.

LA

You don't always hit a home run. But you are truly a very good story teller.

I would have expected that with all the twists and turn this story would have just been a mess. You kept it lively, entertaining and tight. I didn't like the original version but loved how you took it and ran making a very entertaining read! Well done 5 stars!

Once a slut, always a slut!!! Rick would have wade a good Byzantine Emperor with all of prep work and trust but verify. I still think Dani and Shelkey got off a bit light, but its all good anyway.

realistic. She may have been book smart but in life and love, as Ron White says, you can't fix stupid.

Wah, Wah, Wah. Boo hoo hoo. It's a story, it's fiction. It's not his worst ending ever. There was no reconciliation. He divorced the cheater, avoided getting raped financially with all the evidence he collected as leverage, married the hot trainer and had another son with her. The ex blew up like a beached whale and is miserable AND Meat got de-meated in a violent way then disappeared. Good one all around. If you don't like it, don't think it's fair that a MAN should win against a cheating slut vicious wife like her, DON'T READ IT!!! Otherwise if you want to bellyache about it, go to McKlowney's and have some WAH-burgers and French-CRIES and maybe some Whine to wash it all down with.

I simply don't believe that Danielle was that stupid. She would have gotten custody, use of the house, alimony and child support from any Judge, anywhere. She might still get custody. Quit her job, get a really good attorney and go for it. A forensic accountant finds all the money, a stupid PI finds his deal with his firm and she rides thru on easy street with him paying the bills. Oh - she'd get half his retirement too. But I just didn't see her doing anything with Meat. For that matter I don't think Shelly does anything with Meat OR helps her with her stupid plan at the end. This was just totally unbelievable. SO disappointing. Should have been 4 chapters shorter and they should have just had an amicable divorce. That would have been believable.

Worst piece of shit, shit, shit writing since The Epic of Gilgamesh! And that's 4900 years!!!!

Rick was the biggest idiot of all time!! Did he get his law degree from one of those un-accredited law schools that used to advertise on match book covers in the '60s and 70s????????

And why the 180 degree turn of Danille? You dead worthless piece of shit???? And the idiot fool who slaughtered stotues with you!!!!!!

Just to satisfy the deranged Neanderthals like cantbuymy, scorpio(whatever his number is?), and other BTB FOOLS!!!

God damn you to hell!!!!!

Asshole!

Glad to see a cheating slut get whats coming to her NO LOVE NO MARRIAGE

YAY!

Thanks for sharing this Fantastic story with us!

Love you all! GREG.

OH 100 % OF READING ENJOYMENT BYE.

Let's remember FTDS had to build off the original story line, as horrific as it was. I think he (actually THEY) did a great job in making a great story out of an ugly, shabby story. This one was very entertaining and a pleasure to read.

I can see Danielle going back to the 12" douchebag for more: The probability of divorce was waning, Danielle and Rick were getting along better, the future looked brighter than it had for months - things were pretty much back to normal. She let her guard down. She wasn't thinking about the ramifications of being with douchebag again, she never intended to get caught. No cheater ever intends to get caught, but that's usually the case.

My only complaint is she was written as almost a different person, in my opinion, once she told Rick what she'd done. She didn't seem to care all that much about the kids or even Rick. Sure, she threatened to go nuclear over keeping the house and kids, but she was written as more of a petulant, wanton slut rather than the caring, remorseful wife; Everything seemed secondary to her plan of finding a way to keep the marriage AND be able to score with "big dicks" from time to time.

She just spent 6+ chapters trying to demonstrate that she recognized and regretted her horrific behavior, tried to prove she loved Rick dearly, but suddenly she only seemed to be concerned about finding the douchebag or getting another just as large. That was way out of character, but I guess it's possible. She definitely knew it was over, but I still think she'd be practically hysterical knowing she'd lost everything but her job and some money - over a dick. Both figuratively and literally.

Great story, thoroughly enjoyed the telling. Thanks FTDS. We miss you.

Danielle Could not help herself She lied once to many, when if she just kept her legs shut she could have still been married to Rick.

Very good tale, gave it 5 stars.

Kind of long but something was always happening so it moved quickly. I too was disappointed that they didn't end up reconciling but that's not really FTDS's style. I just wish Tina hadn't changed her name to Teri but...

I was sort of hoping for a reconciliation but knew how it would end. Shame really. It just seems so unreal how after so much effort Danielle put into pulling it all back together one phone call from Meat was all it took. One phone call. Damn man, a really bittersweet ending. 5 stars for the story on all chapters, but I'm disappointed on a personal level with the ending. Keep up the great work FTDS, your fans appreciate all the effort you put into your stories.

It was always her, and not the friend. That much is clear on this last page. I suspect that his cheating didn't really upset her all that much. To do what she did, she must have always wanted it. She saw his failure as her opportunity to go for an open marriage.

Still love it. Still five stars. And still a favorite. Will remain one of the best on this site. Got to give credit for these guys making something beautiful out of a crappy beginning.

The end doesn't comport with the middle.

You mage Dani into a split personality. It just doesn't fit.

Should have quit after 7.

So disappointed. :o(

Guess i'll go over to cpete's Chapter 8.5 and see if he can salvage anything from this mess.

You lost all the good work u put .. its impossible for the girl to go to the meat after the effort she put to save her marriage . Its so wrong .

There is no connection at all with all the hard work she put in to save her marriage and destroy it in a single moment .

Big cock lover can never stay faithful for that much time and give that much important to their family.

I must say, u lost all the good work ..

... but after reading this story I am thankful that you don't. Both the husband and the wife in the story are despicable animals. And the constant yo-yoing in feelings between staying married or not lowered my IQ by 50 points. Hence this tirade. Your continuation is a fucking 7 chapters too long. 1* for the entire series.

Well I think the author did too good of a job writing her as a repentant wife that her going back to meat was too far fetched. I also thought she was banging her boss lol the kids mentioned a John and her boss was a Jonathan got me assuming hehe. I enjoyed the read but the ending was lacking as didn't feel her going back was believable. Thanx for writing it.

But he is still a dick. He was better with her than without her. Too bad he couldn't get over his little frail male ego. What a looser.

Some of these may be repeats:

Why didn’t Shelly tell Rick Meat was back in town? And why DID she tell Dani? Did she think it would help things putting that temptation in front of her?

“We can't let one small slip-up ruin that." – He made it ABUNDANTLY clear that she was under a zero tolerance policy, how could she risk things by seeing Meat again, and how can she believe that Rick will forgive “one small slip-up”?

“I know I can live without him” – Obviously not, since she risked her marriage to be with him again.

“You won't get to see the kid” – How can she keep him from the kids?

"No chance at all for us? I know I screwed up, but you have to know I love you," – Yeah, that’s why she tried to frame him for spousal abuse!

To the Anon questioning Dan's weight gain, it was explained here, as well as when Rick had Francine start, that Dani's meals were higher in calories.

Many comments and FTDS response about the length of the story. I think going back to the perp was simply a device for FTDS to finally end it without a RAAC ending. This series could have ended with an epilogue after chapter seven - I think that would have been more credible than Danielle giving up what she worked so hard to claw back - for women it is all about the relationship not the sex. That said, Danielle's unwillingness to accept responsibility was very realistic. Very well written and entertaining chapter.

Great story until the second last page. I love good fiction but fantasy should be left for kids fables.

He should have got rid of her a lot earlier after her over the top revenge and constant lies. Instead he was allowed to cheat more times with more lovers than she ever did. Although he didn't directly rub his adultery in her face he didn't hide it from her either. He was happy to let her catch him at it a couple of times so rubbing her face in it. And her cheating with much bigger cocks was evened out with his cheating with much younger women.

The fantasies on the 2nd last page are ridiculous. Going out to dinner to talk things over, rigging up cameras in 2 hours and the girls staging the attack - Rubbish.

Another fantasy that was brought up a number of times in the story was the settlement terms. In reality, which is the basis of good fiction, if she fought the divorce she would have got the kids and he would would have lost his senior position. He would never have been able to achieve his threats.

After reading this I also thought it was only a matter of time until she cheated again. If not meat then someone else. I'm happy he ended up with Jenny . He took a lot more than I would have and her ass would have been on the curb a lot earlier. I hope she ended up broke and alone. Jenny will certainly be good for Rick and faithful. I'm not a woman hater although through experience I hate cheaters (both men and women). Anyway great writing and I love the ending.

I knew when Danielle went back the third time, that she would cheat again with Meat. I would have hired some guys to take her off while I was in the middle of a 5K race. And she would never be seen alive again. Yep. I could live with that ending. She never gave one thought to Eric and Erin when she was meeting other men, only when she wanted to use them to threaten her husband in pending divorce proceedings.

Change the tune please. The reader invests in the relationship, the reconciliation, the hope for the future then you just burn it all down. Why bother? She puts her love, her family, her happiness behind her just for a big dick. Always the same pathetic morality that you you seem to give your female characters. You must be a bitter man.

Shame to waste your good writing.

Is that I'm only able to give you a 5...

I mean, it's a shame she turned out to be a size queen, that some other way couldn't have been found to explain her behavior... but it's great that she put on all that weight...

Cant any1 write a story about hoe a big dick is not all it is made up to be?

Been writing these as I went along, so some of the earlier remarks don't have the benefit of hindsight.

He spoke to “Teri”? I thought it was Tina.

I don’t understand the sudden change in Angela, she had been 100% on his side the last we saw her. I DO think that Rick is over-reacting to Tom’s statement – Tom’s “I don’t believe it!” was meant as an accusation of lying by Rick, more as shock that Angela would say such a thing.

Meanwhile Rick’s concern about Danielle’s performance on the video should be eased by the thought that that’s just what it was, a “performance”, and NOT an expression of some need that he can’t satisfy.

He should risk talking to Shelly. She seemed sincere in wanting to help them, ideally she would tell him if Meat contacted her, but at least you would hope she would answer a question honestly.

“We can't let one small slip-up ruin that."

“One small slip-up” after all they’ve gone through, knowing his trust isn’t CLOSE to being restored? Is she insane?

Why should he believe her? Why does she need “closure”? And if Rick truly satisfies her as she keeps claiming, why couldn’t she resist Meat? And CERTAINLY what the fuck is she doing meeting him TWO MORE TIMES?! After the initial “small slip-up” she should have run the other way as fast as she could.

I was actually starting to root for reconciliation but now I want to BTB!

Maybe, MAYBE in some Bizarro universe he could get past the one time “I just had to know” bull shit, but two more times?

“the things he made me feel were incredible”, just feeds into all of Rick’s insecurities.

She keeps saying “one slip-up” when it was THREE times!

“I know I can live without him” – obviously not.

“There's nothing I won't do for you” – except be faithful!

I can’t believe she STILL wants a chance after trying to frame him for domestic assault and battery.

longer than most of your "finish" stories, but I enjoyed every bit of it. I was beginning to think that all would be well and the Andersons would ride off into the sunset. But that just isn't your style. Yep, they say "once you go long, you'll never...." or something like that. Dani was so unbelievably stupid, even screaming..."It will never happen again!" and she had said that before!

5 *'s Now I can go see what was posted on LW today since I had to finish this.

But it went where it went - too bad really - they should have been able to make it work - but she was NUTS to even start down the raod she traveled.

We never got to learn where John came into it - was he a fuck buddy befpore we all arrived on the scene??

Initially interesting..than repetitive dull.

She reminded me of the tiger or lion that got a taste of human meat. Once the wild animal has killed a person, they MUST be put down. Danielle got her taste of her wild meat, and she would never be trusted again.

Just think about it; the bottom line is she shows UNBELIEVABLE contempt and hatred for her husband, then wants "just one more chance...." She shoots him down on the day of the biggest promotion of his life, call him every name in the book, and claims she loves him. She needs years of professional help (surprised FTDS didn't write that into the story.) Reading this story about her was like watching a train wreck happen....

FTDS's segue of TCDC changed the original author's water into wine. Kudos for your skillful writing.

He said more with one word -meh- than you did in countless pages.

This was like taking a hot-air balloon round the world trip, getting on the Orient Express, twice, hitching a ride to the south pole, and then swimming back home, ALL just to visit your next door neighbour!

To say it was pointlessly drawn out would be like saying the surface of the sun is mildly warm - the understatement of the year! 2 pages could have covered this travesty quite easily, instead of having a competition with Encyclopedia Britannica over who can needlessly force as many words as possible down on paper, metaphorically speaking!

If you cannot improve upon the original (Admittedly garbage) story, then what is the point? Even though I skimmed the last 3 chapters, barely reading the salient points, (By that time I really didn't care about the outcome, so repetitive was it, so unlikable the characters), I'm angry at myself for even wasting that much of my time!

Do I sound pissed at you? Well I am! Because I know for a fact that you can do so much better than this! Perhaps the problem is your choice of source material to do a continuation on, but this was FAR from your best work!

I realize the author was trying to make a silk purse out of a sow's ear, as the old saying goes, and the results were predictable. I must give FTDS kudos for managing what he did. That said, though the writing was well done as far as mechanics, the characters and the overall parameters that the storyline demanded pretty much wrecked this whole exercise before it even got out of the gate.

At least for me, I need someone to root for, and there was a scarcity of anyone to get behind in this wretched mess. I need to cheer for the good guy and wish harm to the bad guy. In this tale, it seems that all assembled with just a few notable exceptions were a hive of villainy and wretchedness. The whole exercise frankly left me depressed and feeling the need for a long hot shower. As always, this opinion is mine and mine alone, and the mileage of others will surely vary.

The "happy ending" side of me is sad that things didn't work out.

The BTB side says she got what she deserved.

Frankly, I blame Shelly. She should have told Rick as soon as Meat came back to town, and certainly should NOT have told Danielle!

Also, KNOWING that Rick was still insecure about how Danielle felt about his size compared to Meat, how Danielle thought that he could EVER get over her going back to Meat defies comprehension.

Meh

What a piece of CRAP. We're supposed to believe that Danielle was so desperate to stay with this asshole that she would agree to let him have sex with her best friend? Or that Shelly would even want anything to do with him? Or that Danielle suddenly became overweight? Or that he ever stopped fucking Jenny in there home, in front of the kids, rubbing it in his wife's face? Or that a young sexy trainer like Jenny would have wanted any thing to do with an asshole like Rick in the first place?

You if want to "finish" someone else's story you really ought to continue it in the same vain it was going in, have respect for the original story. What you did here was just CHICKENSHIT. If y a want to write your own story then grow a pair and come up with your own story. To bad Lit. doesn't let you least favorite a story.

Great story (ending) and writing FTDS. Longed for it to go on and longed for it to end... so I could move to another of your postings.

Thanks for sharing on Lit. which by the way I like more now that I don't read any anonymous comments.

x

Being single at the moment and born with far more than the average I'd really like to know. I've never found a woman who suddenly turned stupid after seeing the Johnson, but more then a few who didn't want to try it on after seeing it. I'm of the opinion that size queens pretty much only exist in stories... or run in a very specific circles, namely swingers and fetishists.

Good story, though I still don't understand how he didn't just destroy her at the end. I can understand keeping it quite for his own career, but I think I would have removed a zero from the final settlement as a "fuck you, you dumb slut, be happy you're not in prison". Then again, he probably ended up with Jenny partially because of his compassionate handling of the Ex...

I think FTDS dropped the ball on this one. No Wimps nor Cuckolds??? This guy was one of the worst I have ever read about. The more I read the more I wanted to slap him. This woman and her friend were nothing but cheats and liars. It should have been all over after he received her contract. He gets everything in order and then he dumps her. How he keeps giving her chance after chance is beyond amazing. I think everybody who read this story knew she was going to cheat again.

She was an attorney, educated. Surely she knew what she did was a sure fire why to get a man to leave her. revenge sex is never a good idea, but her torture of him was crimes against humanity bad. Then, his guilt over cheating his self, and love for his kids, made him forgive her. But their was a the nagging 3rd time she cheated. The working long hrs thing was disturbing. He had her gps, when exactly did she cheat on him again?

But surely going back to meat, she had to have known what would happen, and she did it anyway 3x. And her friend, knowing meat was back and telling the wife he was, well, she was back to pimping her out.

A lot was to outlandish in the story, but excellent writing. You had me pulling for them towards the end, in spite of her actions I though she was remorseful.

Size I dont think was the issue. I think she liked the submissiveness, the slave girl thing. And she got off on the humiliation of the husband to much. I think shellys explanation was made up, I think the weight, his affair, was an excuse. Perhaps she had been cheating before?

It's a story.......that is what I kept chanting to myself all the time I read. Don't get me wrong, it was a really great story, but there were just so many suspension of belief things in it that it got a little hard to maintain the 'it's all just for fun' wholeness of it all. I don't regret reading it, and would recommend it to everyone....gave it five stars after all. I just wished that parts of it had not come across as so far from reality that they literally crossed into another dimension, for me at least.

Excellent end of the story. Loved the twist in the last chapter.

Peoples opinions seem to be divided over Danielle. Is she a slut or is she addicted to big cocks....IMO, she's simply a self centered, bored woman who wanted her cake and ice cream. She has the emotional maturity of a 14 yo and is incapable of seeing past herself. You can bet, if the situation were flipped and he was the one at the end wanting to be married a get some on the side, all hell would have broken loose.

People also seem to be divided about Rick. He's either a whiny, complaining pussy or a sadistic, over the top ass. My opinion on him, he's a normal guy who was trying to figure out what to do while dealing with a massive amount of pain and still protect himself.

Throughout the story he does repeat himself constantly (mistaken for whining and pity party), thats what people do when their world has been ripped apart. And he was right to give himself time and to try to work things out. And if the marriage failed, he was protected.

The best advice for people considering divorce? Do everything you can to make it work. That way, if it does end, you know you've done everything you could and have no regrets.

After a slow and stuttering upward trajectory to reconciliation, you surprised me with the final chapter. Earlier it was mentioned that the wife was working late nights and I thought "Aha! She's back to cheating!", and I had this idea that Shelley was actually going to wind up with him in a twist. Shows what I know. I think there are more fantasy size queens than real ones, but the fact that the wife just can't stay away after all the agony in her marriage seemed pretty abrupt. Anyhow, a great story arc that I really enjoyed. I love the anons who read all 8 chapters then complain that you wasted their time. That was great time spent IMHO. 5 stars.

Now you know why the original author never finished the story. I can't believe how long it took me to read it. I can only imagine how long it took you to write it. But I have to say it was very thorough and entertaining. Thank you Oh and Robert (searching0240) I loved your analysis on how Americans viewed themselves and their place in the world. At least, I thought that was the culture you were referring to.

Is she an addict, or just a very selfish and self-centered person? Most of the respondents seem to think she is "addicted to big cocks". But her comments about her husband not understanding, how hard it is to work long hours, and how hard it is to manage your weight, seem to indicate that she is just unable to understand any challenges that she doesn't face directly.

We live in a narcissistic culture. We are taught to believe that the individual is the most important thing. That, coupled with the inherent way that humans conceptualize the world, means that each of us believes that we are the center of the universe. We believe that reality starts with our perceptions, and moves in concentric circles outward. (me, my family, my friends, my community, etc) Subsequently, what is good for me is best for the world.

I like the fact that the husband got what he wanted. And she was gradually made aware of how well off she was, before she decided to "push the envelope". Not real life, but entertaining none the less.

Robert

I will make a few comments: First, $3000 escorts are way overpriced unless there are rich fools that don't know what the going rate it. Second, Shelly and Danielle were fools with that contract and Danielle was just a horny woman looking to fuck around, I do not believe that she was that concerned with her husband's weight. She was just being a foolish woman wanting to humiliate her husband and get-out-of-jail-free fucks. If she was all bent out of shape and humiliated she could have gone for the divorce right then, instead she wanted to make her husband out to be an idiot (which he was). It was her misfortune to get hooked up with a great big dick the first one she screwed with. Some women are queen-sized cock fools. I know, just a story and a good one. I was glad to see that no feelings were hurt, blah, blah and that the story worked out as well as could be expected considering the way it went. Hubby was just too fair with Danielle at the end (and all through the story). Author, I have read nearly all your stories published here and this is my favorite despite my little criticisms. I did question who John was but did not let it bother me and I thought the poker game was misplaced (as you later did). Being familiar with poker games, cheating wives, cheating husbands, call girls, whores, (no $3000 escorts, way over my head) and similar low-life's I can identify with many people in this story. Hard-nosed lawyers that like to fuck around (until their wives catch them and they find out how much it will cost them to leave with their sweetie) are also friends out of my past. It takes all kinds and I have become acquainted with many in the last 50 years. Kudos again, author, will make you a favorite if I haven't already. Please find some more stories to finish, thank you.

I could have done without the last chapter, it was actually painful to read as soon as Meat was mentioned again.

Danielle had been thrown off balance from the beginning of Rick's campaign to beat the contract she had forced on him. You could see her progressively falling apart with each new turn of the screw. She was NOT going to get the house and custody of the kids, because Rick had spent months away from his work as the kids' primary at-home parent and was now working fewer hours compared to Danielle; at best she might have gotten some maintenance if Rick's new position paid a lot more than hers. In other words, in every way that mattered, she had lost the "diet challenge." Realizing that Rick had outmaneuvered her at every move threw off her judgement, which led to her act of desperation. It was the exact reverse of the lapse in Rick's judgement had caused him to sign the contract in the first place.

The money Rick had concealed during the "challenge" and his period of pretend unemployment would be irrelevant to the divorce, because everything in that episode in their marriage had been settled with their previous reconciliation. Danielle's adultery with Meat had led to an entirely new situation.

no matter the substance, TK U MLJ LV NV

I can see the sense of it but for me there were too many holes. In the first place I don't believe either Danielle or Shelley have anything to do with Meat when he shows up. That seems too far fetched. Secondly, Danielle is a smart attorney. So she never would have thought up the scheme to have Shelley beat her. She had it right. She was going to get custody, the house, child support and alimony. She's going to get a great divorce attorney who is going to hire a forensic accountant and all his "hiding" money will be for naught. His firm, starting with Tom, will not protect him. They've already told him a "cuckold" scandal will not be acceptable to the firm. So Danielle is going to have him over a barrel if he wants to continue his career. And speaking of his career, when he gets deposed Tom will tell them that he never quit his job. While I agree he should divorce the cheating slut he would have lost big time in Court in a very messy fight. And her weight gain? That was too implausible. Women in her position depend upon their appearances and go to great lengths to maintain that advantage. So I didn't believe for a second that she put on a ton of weight. Overall a good story. Way too long and too much repetitive stuff. But I enjoyed the effort. Go finish some other stuff. God knows that there's a ton of it out there that's been left unfinished.

Good story, good character development, happy ending. He gave the bitch way, way to many chances; she was as evil as she was stupid. Could have been a great 2-3 chapter story if you got rid of the repetition.

BDEarth

Not sure how I missed this. Very we'll done, sir!

Long, but it went smoothly. First I thought they were doomed, then it looked like they would make it, then they were doomed again, then... well I guess you see the emotions of chapters 2 - 8. Very, very entertaining, I love it.

This is a long, LONG short story. As it tries to cover all the distance from initial heartbreak and humiliation to final divorce, but it doesn't begin to cover all the real distance a humiliated man (or woman) would have to go through.

That's not a slam on this story. It's just a realization that (1) this is all fantasy and fiction and (2) you can't tell every significant event that real people go through.

It's a good yarn and a satisfying finish to a preposterous beginning.

HC

Pity that five stars is all I'm allowed to express my approval of this story - I would have awarded you with an entire stellar system (the clever "U-turn" in the last two chapters is priceless!) . Kudos!

That you can refuse your spouse something and then be angry and outraged because that spouse goes and gets it somewhere else. If you do that, you're the one who's cheating your partner in life out of life, and you deserve to lose him/her.

Did Danielle have another lover Rick never found out about?

I think it was very foolish of the husband to stop surveillance on his wife so early. He might not need the full package anymore, like someone from the PI firm following the wife around all the time, but reduced signal interception (bugged home, recording of telephone conversations, etc) would have been well within his means. That he gave that up when he didn't trust his wife and wasn't sure yet if they could stand the test of time after that debacle is something I don't understand.

The ending, well, that's very much the result of his stupidity. He started trusting his wife again, started believing her lies again and only caught onto her through pure chance, when he saw one of her old lovers in person.

All that said, I'm a bit surprised that Rick was even willing to give his marriage another chance. I can understand cheating and I can believe the need for revenge, but Danielle's choice was so far over the top, that I don't know a single guy in my circle of friends and acquaintances who would allow himself to be reeled in again afterwards.

The ending is just awful because it makes no sense. The problem here is that over the story Rick gets smarter. He realizes that he really cannot trust his wife. And given what has happened that DOES make sense.

In addition his intelligence regarding his wife going back to her lover for a third time AFTER she promised not to AND engaging in a massive deceit / plot is also very well done plot development by the author because it is is a key issue.

BUT... if Rick is smart enough and wise enough to to realize the significance of going back to her lover for third time ...

If Rick is smart enough to realize why that's so important ...

Rick is s smart enough to realize he cannot trust his wife and that has the cameras and recordings his own home ....

Then it follows that Rick HAD to be smart enough to realize that her entire argument about the contract and weight reduction program was simply a manipulation : a vicious scheme so that she could fuck other men.

Rick cannot be this brilliant and insightful on one hand then on the other handbe pathetically stupid and not grasp the significance of his wife's deceitful massive betrayal and public humiliation.

And that's what kills the story

oh im so impressed a slap on the wrist...............wow that showed her............oh he's so scary mad........i wont like you any more............YAWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT VENGEANCE IS.....BURN THEM ALLLLLLLLLL. This is the most amazing thing ever...........GASP AWWWW OH MY GOD!! a cup of warm water thrown in her face yep thats nuclear?

She should have been ejected in the first chapter. Once a cheater.....

did Rick try to get his wife psychiatric help. He obviously could afford it. She was like an alcoholic in her dependance on large cocks and lying. She said she wanted the marriage to last, and in the next step threatened to ruin him. That's just SICK!. Did the author deliberately make her that way or is HE himself sick? Rich

Loved this story, the twists and unexpected surprises. Wish you would also consider writing some of your own stories from the beginning, but I love your endings.

Thanks, hugs and kisses in advance for your next work!

... you go back to your closet and watch ONE of your WHORE WIVE's lovers FINISH IN HER ASS then take your CUCK LOVING stories AND SHOVE THEM UP YOUR ASS!!!

... Now "THAT'S" how you FinishTheDamnStory!!!!

I like your stories. Fuck all of these hatin' pricks. Truthfully, I don't feel like she got near enough punishment but I'm sure that it's my own BTB tendencies speaking. Keep em' coming.

It was over after she walked out the door the first time in Ch 1.

Chs. 2-8 were just the marriage's dying gasps we didn't need to read.

'nuff said.

PS PLEASE Don't fInish any more stories!!

PLEASE!!

I have to agree with Harry from VA's views. I find that to be an awful fast switch from remorseful wife to completely selfish and unrepentant bitch. It was like after you skillfully wrote a reconciliation that touched many hearts you regretted it and needed it to be a burn the bitch piece. Your downfall was that you made her so likeable in the previous chapters that you couldn't burn her without the audience feeling cheated. You had to turn her back into a cheating narcissistic whore all over again. It doesn't fit with her personality that you built up. After going through all of that, why would she risk it all again? Then on top of that, why would she bring that ridiculous proposal to him? There is no way she would have thought that he would go for it after 8 chapters of him doing everything in his power to fight her in the previous "agreement". I just can't buy that someone would fight that hard for trust and then throw it away so easily. I honestly feel cheated with this chapter. I have to give this 1 star. It pains me to do that because you were so good in the previous chapters.

In parts this was an excellent development of the original storyline. Too long yes, but enough to keep me reading.

Solid ending without being spectacular. As commented elsewhere, not your best work, but you still rate as one of the best on-site for developing and finishing other peoples storylines in the best way. Thanks for your works, I'll be back for the next ones.

... That size queen ending does not justify the rehashing, redundancy and tedium. You've done better. If the goal is to finish the story, then you should have kept your eye on the goal and ended it around chapter 4. Panther fan.

The change in the repent wife in this chapter does not seem to make any sense. The wife suddenly switches from the desperate remorseful and Pleading wife to big Cock queen... really rulings the end of the story

I realize in the last two chapters when they were having sex and trying to reconnect Rick mentioned several times that he had sensed that when they were were having sex ... that his wife was overcompensating. But the switch or change in the wife's behavior occurs too fast. And that leads to another problem.

If she was really this much as they big cock slut then why the fuck have we been wasting our time reading this long story? The sudden and violent change in he wife's attitude and demeanor simply because the Mr Big cock shows up means that the entire time Rick assessment of how he viewed his wife ... a evil twisted emasculating a lying controlling cunt... was essentially correct.

so what was point of this looooong story?

wimp story ending...... aww we can all just be buddies no hard feeling..... where is the purity of hate?

Read down through the comments as FTDS made a post about alot of the issue's people brought up and some mistakes on his part about story points that went nowhere.

John was just one of the kids school mates it seems.

someone asked "Just a few questions. "Who T F is John?"

I think John is Jonathan Morris, the senior partner at Danielle's firm.

When Danielle first got the job there, Rick wondered if there were ulterior motives. I guess there were. Would have been nice to have it confirmed or not brought up John in the first place.

Don't get me wrong; the writing was awesome, but I just really did not care for the last couple of chapters. Case in point this ending, WHY WOULD ANY MAN WITH ANY SHRED OF SELF-MUTH'A-FUCK'N- RESPECT even think about taking such a horrific excuse for a whore wife back after all the shit she did, let alone actually reconciling with the skank! I think it's ridiculous for "wussy Ricky" to think a slut can change her spots--of course given the opportunity/choice she will REPEATEDLY sacrifice her pathetic excuse of a marriage in a instant for a chance at a 12 incher. You didn't give Ricky his balls dude. He even let her off easy in the terms of the divorce, 5 years of alimony or until she re-marries, no child support, $300K, plus whatever the house sell for---?!--- are you on drugs writer?! What universe do you see such a man like Ricky? The wife lost respect for Ricky a long time ago that's why her revenge, humiliation ,belittling, eagerness to have a BIG DICK rammed up in her regardless if her marriage is already on life support. A wife that truly truly loves her husband would NEVER EVER do the things this wife did, even towards the end she humiliated him once again. She wasn't apologetic; she never even took responsibility for her actions. I guess this story is better suited for the sick fucks who enjoys licking another mans cum out of his cum slut wife's cesspool pussy. I think even towards the very end Ricky was STILL A FUCK'N WIMPY CUCK, WHO ENDED UP PAYING FOR HER TO CONTINUE TO ENJOY THOSE HUGE DICKS SHE'S BECOME SO ACCUSTOMED TO. If I was a man & I was Ricky, I'd burn the earth with the whore, no fucking way I'd stick my dick anywhere near her let alone in her!-- yuck! I certainly wouldn't touch her pimp/mentor with a ten feet pole-- why would I risk pissing razor blades or Worse AIDS? The actions of your characters doesn't seem to fit their profession as lawyers-- they both seem really really fuck'n stupid to me. This story doesn't belong in the loving wives section, there wasn't a fucking thing loving about it. A cuck's diet--?!-- what is this? Is this some sort of guide for wives who have a fat bloated wimpy husband at home? This story was just really really lame. I'm a woman & I wanted to see Ricky grow a set & dump the whore. I should've known better by the title alone. Oh well lesson learned.

Of low life no class over paid lawyers who are too stupid and shallow to be even remotely interesting.