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Click here"Take me Daddy," Jo said and he was again forced to swallow hard. He reached out to where she was offering her hands to him and she pulled as he stood from the couch, his erect cock bumping into her belly due to the small space between them. He stepped closer, his cock sliding further up against her belly and he stared into his daughter's eyes as he lowered his head to her, his lips parting.
Jo met her father's kiss and accepted his tongue into her mouth, probing with her own, their lips melding together, the shape of their mouths adjusting to each other's movements as happens when two people truly kiss for the first time. It was a hard, hungry kiss, their lips applied roughly to each other in desperation as if it could well be the last thing that they ever did. The tongues dueled more than danced, at least until the kiss settled somewhat and both of them accepted that it was ok and realized that the other person wanted it just as much.
Dave's hands explored. They slid over the smooth skin of Jo's back, down to her perky butt, squeezing and stroking. He felt Jo's body fold in against his, her breasts crushed against his chest and then her hands were moving too, sliding under his shirt, caressing the skin of his back.
"Take me to the bedroom," Jo said, pushing herself back far enough to look her father in the eye as her hands released his pants and pushed them to the floor. Dave tugged his shirt off and held a hand out to his daughter, offering to lead her. Jo smiled and placed her small hand in his, a shiver running down her back at the contact. She squeezed her thighs together briefly before he stepped off, leading her through the house to the room that had been solely his for far too long.
As they entered the room Dave turned their positions about and had Jo lay herself upon his bed, then he crawled up over the top of her, pausing to place a delicate kiss upon her belly, his cock rubbing up the inside of her calf. He continued and paused again, taking her left nipple into his mouth, his tongue caressing and teasing it before repeating the movement on the other nipple, his cock resting against her thigh, just above her knee. Jo squeezed her legs together, trapping the solid meat between them briefly, causing him to groan until he moved up to kiss her.
He pressed his body against hers, covering her now, conscious that as she relaxed her legs, his cock began to rub against her pussy. He again kissed her, not wanting to enter her yet, but it took all the restraint that he could muster as he felt how wet she was, the head of his cock probing firmly at her entrance before sliding up and across her clit, drawing a gasp from her. He looked at her and she smiled.
"I need to taste you," Dave said, slithering his way back down his daughter's body. He knelt on the floor and hooking his hands under her knees, pulled her toward him. Jo spread her legs invitingly and Dave paused for a few moments to admire the perfection of her pussy, the swollen labia and the pink inner lips peeking from between them, the sheen of moisture glistening in the light. He could smell her, the distinctive odour of pussy and the smell drew him in as he lowered his face until he was able to caress her with his tongue.
He probed deep into her entrance, sliding his tongue around before withdrawing it and licking more tenderly. He explored every fold and crease of her young pussy, taking time to lick her extravagantly and study the beautiful sight of her. He used his lips to pull at her labia, her clit, to further her pleasure until Jo was writhing almost uncontrollably on the bed. He glanced up to see her fingers playing with his nipples and felt his cock twitch. Nothing turned him on like seeing a woman truly enjoy her nipples. He climbed back up onto the bed and watching him, Jo repositioned herself with her head on the pillow.
"Are you sure?" he said quietly.
"Fuck me Dad," Was her definite response.
Dave moved over her body, using his hand to guide his cock until his head was nestled against her. He thrust firmly, his cock working into her pussy. Pulling back, he thrust again and slid easily inside until he pushed up against her hymen. His desire was so strong that he didn't give it a moment's thought, just pulled back and thrust firmly inside her again, tearing through the barrier. Jo cried out as she was torn asunder.
Dave thrust over and over again, his cock as deep as he could get it in her pussy. He stared down at her breasts as they moved against her chest each time he thrust his cock into her. As with when he'd fucked Allison in the dark room, he felt like a virgin himself he was so aroused.
Part of him was berating himself for not being more gentle, for not lasting longer, for caring only about the fact that he needed to cum and not worrying about how she felt about the whole ordeal. But he couldn't contain himself and with a last series of desperate, hard thrusts he exploded inside her pussy, feeling his seed cum in waves from his cock.
Jo cried out as she felt her father cum in her pussy. She hurt, but she wanted it. Her pussy was full of her Dad's cum!
Dave collapsed to her side, panting, spent and exhausted. Jo lay beside him, her mind a whirl of activity as she began to consider what had just happened.
- COMMENTS
Did his daughter get pregnant after cum in her
That the question, did he continue to have sec with the other girls or just his daughter
Awesome story. I loved the build up, expectation and the risk! Very erotic
Good story, but I’m forced to agree with the previous commenter. As one who has taught darkroom techniques, I can tell that your knowledge seems to be somewhat lacking regarding what goes on in a darkroom, and how film is developed. As this plays a major role in how your story plays out, it would’ve been good for you to understand it better.
As a fellow writer here on Literotica, I know what it’s like to receive unfavorable comments. So I’m not trying to bust your bubble by any means. Everything else I really enjoyed.
I’m still going to give you five stars for the great erotic content!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Mr_Brady ☀️
The story and the scheming, devilish girls were a lot of fun. But you don't know a damn thing about darkroom work and photo classes. Try taking one before writing about it again.
Should have made the experience much better for Jo after she gave herself to him. Otherwise a good erotic story. The drawn out teasing by the girls, their own exploration was excellent.
The author should get a "break your dick award" never ending masturbation story. Thank You
Nikki,
I love this story and can't wait to read the rest but alas I must take a break to finish with my hand what your words have gotten so hard. A beautiful and sexy story line that I wish would happen to me.
Thanks,
Ron
Damn, I loved this ... right up to the last few paragraphs. Dad turned into an asshole with his own daughter. Poor girl will always remember her first time with not only a one-pump-chump, but her dad being that chump. Fuck him.
Very hot story. What's going to happen now that the story is out? Is Jo going to let it be known that she is doing her dad?
Thanks for sharing this story. I'm on to the next chapter.
Nikki2021 is amazing. This is a hot sexy set of stories, had me very "excited".
Loved it!
Thank you very much. No fat cows, no 38DD's,and no Anal. There may be some anal in the series,but very erotic, exactly what I want to read.
Enjoyed the teasing and the build up most.. but that’s just me!
Father daughter ALWAYS get an automatic 1 star from me so I dumped and voted.
As a high school teacher myself, in my mid 40’s, I understand how hard it is to resist the flirting and the attraction to the reckless young ladies! This is well written. I can’t wait to read more.
I loved every word! Having been a teacher, it brought so many memories flooding back.
...I just had to read this very sexy story. As I read the anvenures of incredibly lucky Dave, it reminded me of some of my favorite teacher moments.
I only had a couple of female photographers ever, but I did have a hot student once write an erotic fiction story about catching her favorite teacher in the dark room after school. She gave me the story before class one day and I read it while they took a test. I could not get out of my desk the rest of the period or it would have been obvious how excited I was. Her very detailed descriptions were what got me started in erotic fiction.
A few years later we were working on a deadline after school and I heard some of the editors (all girls, none looking much like Sylvia, Lucy, Allison, etc...) giggling. One of the girls had some nude Polaroids she was thinking of giving her boyfriend. All of a sudden this very average girl became incredibly sexy in my mind. I asked to borrow them for the evening and she let me. I kept them for a few days and masturbated to them nightly.
My only sexual adventure in the dark room was when I had a student teacher (college senior) seduce me in there twice. Both times she let me finish in her mouth, so that is the only thing I got in my dark room that Dave didn't ;-)
Great story. And I plan on getting in to more of your topics over the next few days.
Your story was a 5 of 5, it had me thrilled to the end, but there are some points that i can't fail to notice:
-You took a long time developing the settig for the dark room and was kinda wasted for the daughter, could have used it and still made it so personal and great.
-The inter action cuts, where he developed film and where girls explored eachother, felt a little too many and a bit out of focus, this was an Incest/Taboo storie after all: but in the end it had so much thrown in that it losed consistency.
-Bulding on the last idea, it was maybe 2 to 4 pages longer than necessary due to the cuts, that made me fall from arousal a few times.
On the end it's your story and you tell it how you like, just my two cents there, and then again i LOVED your story anyways.
Excellent story line. Exciting all the way until the end!
Thx for all the ebb and flow, build and retreat, euphoria and deflation. So multidimensional. Amazing work. Thank you.
Terrific story Nikki, love the build up, not too long not to short, and very arousing. Love your mind. You are now one o my favorite authors. I wish I could write with your style and imagination. You inspire fantasy. I wish I could write!
Beautiful story. I love the build-up, I love the subplots, I love the resolution. I come back to this one and it's sequel frequently.
This was pretty amazing. Probably among the top 10 I've read on this site.
One thing though. While some girls have hymens pretty deep inside, most are pretty much at the entrance. With this much defloration... you should have at least googled that. lol
Other than that (and the pitch black of the dark room), this was well done.
i was extremely turned on throughout reading this and you did a fantastic job, but the whole idea of it being pitch black in the dark room annoyingly enough bothers me because i am in a photography class and in the dark room, your eyes adjust and you can easily see every single thing in the room clearly. despite my pet peeve, this is amazing!
Beyond my wildest fantasies. The story flowed well. I love the way the teenage girls explored their sexuality together.
I'm a bit of a realist, and it's a testament to your writing ability that I soon suspended my disbelief and thoroughly enjoyed every riveting word! You see, I'm a photographer with a long history of dark room work and know full well that the real "dark" work in the darkroom is fleeting while film is being developed. The rest of the time, the safe light gives you plenty of illumination to see what's going on. But I didn't care, because the imagery was so vivid and the narrative so exquisite. Bravo. Well done.
Great story, a bit long, maybe cut up into chapters would solve it ?? Thanks.
I loved the story right up until the end. I was expecting them to do it in the darkroom. I gave it a 4, the virginity issue could have been dealt with by a vibrator.
Nikki 20_21
I declare that you are my favorite writer. I particularly enjoy you attention to seemingly ordinary details, which make the story seem like reality. I find you expertly adept at erotic description and I will be devouring all of you stories here.
Thank You
Jeff
I really enjoy the story, my second read of it actually, it is a bit slow but it changes up a bit here and there. I am pretty disappointed with the dad, cumming in both girls in like thirty freaking seconds its pretty fucking pathetic really! Hell a grown man that jacks off, probably several times a day, he should have pretty damned good control, not be a fucking firecracker, worse he's a douche for just getting his nut and not caring while taking the virgin daughter! Sad! I'd have worked her over nice and slow, worked through the pain till it was a dull throb and the fun stuff started overtaking it.
Well maybe loser boy will redeem himself in the next chapter! Been so long since ive read it I dont remember!
Everything else about the story is a lot of fun!
A fantastic story. I loved hoe you took your and paid attention to detail. Keep writing!
One of the most erotic stories I've ever read. I normally need visual stimuli to cum, but this story alone did the job. Please continue with further chapters
I fired off at least 8 times reading your story. Would reallly love to read on chapter 3 and on on of this story. I absolutely love this story so much!!!pls continue if u have the ti.e to write
Awesome story! A good tease without actually being an annoying cock-tease story! Write on!
Fuck this is such a hot story I couldn't keep my hand off my cock. Mind bending cum time after time. Thanks!
Had to read a page at a time!! Had a fantastic cum after every page!!! Thank you.
You are amazing. The intensity of this story is incredible. I have cum so many times to this submission. Thank you
Plotting, teasing and fulfillment .... everyone got something special ... Hot story .. Thanks
What a great story loved the secretiveness of it all especially when it was his daughters turn had me so hot
Third time I have read this story. So hot!! I wanted so bad to be the one in the dark room! Secret sex like this is the best!
Your story kicked so much ass, definately my favoriteive read here since I found this sight last year.id love to see a part two! Keep up the excellent work
And wow it deserves! I'd just finished reading your story brother sister part 1, and was sort of disappointed by it. The sex was hot, the "story" was not.
This story is completely different. The story is progressive, sexy, fun, and flows very nicely. To say this was hot was an understatement. Right now I am contemplating on how to get this on my phone to read it when I am on the go. I've read many sexy stories, but there aren't so many that I choose to save, to keep, to reread over and over. You did a fantastic job on this one, and if this is what I have to look forward to I am certain I'll be eagerly awaiting all of your stories from now on.
Nice long exposition and tease. Hope this is not the end of this story, as all these girls deserve a chance to explore their own desires and satisfy Dave's as well. :-) I sincerely want a part two of this.
This story is so hot I've only made it to page two! Keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to slowly finishing this story over the next few days. Some things are meant to be savored.
It was very well written, capturing a lot of the ups and downs of emotions and curiosity as the girls all increase their explorations.
Possible the only quibble is that the end is way too abrupt. Its like you just gave up since you had taken the story to its climax (no pun intended).
- JT
very good story would love to read more of it to see if Dave and Jo invite one of her friends to join them next time
Amazing story. I read it over three different sessions and came every time. Played into all my highschool lesbian fantasies and all my naughty daughter ones too!
OMG!!!!! That was THE BEST story i have ever read on literotica, fantastic writing and amazing storyline. cant wait to read part two. great job well done x
Heya, just wanted to let you know that I think your story gave me a new kink of the mystery and secrets of sex in a dark room with strangers ;) Obviously enjoyed it a lot, just wanted to say though that the climax with Dave and his daughter seemed a bit short and undetailed compared to the rest of the story. Still 5/5 though! Nice job.
This is a very well written story and I enjoyed it very much. One point and for a female you should know: />
Other than that all was good.
RS
The best from the best! Building a dark room right now! The darkness, anonymity, incest, and bi school girl sex all add up to the ultimate arousal. So hot! Cant wait to read part 2!
words available at this time cannot express the shear wow factor of this story. simply amazing and time well spent. by all means; keep it up
Now I'm late for work and smelling of sex, but totally worth it, having read this till the end!
u never disappoint wonderful story i love the way you write you know exactly what i love 2 read between you and bluedragon Im cover for a while. thanks for your hard work pls dont stop
You are very creative writer who has written a "pager turner", despite the fact your main character is a teacher who fucks his students and a father who has sex w/his daughters friends while she's in the room.
5 stars! you really set the scene for this one :P
so much anticipation and build up!!!
love it!!1
omfgosh , this is so fuckin epic .. like you definitely are an amazing author, hands down !!!!
9000 outta 5. Ya, best series on the site and your an amazing author, my fave.
Have to say this is an awesome erotic tale here thank you lassie. Gods am going to read Chapter 2 now and wish you had chapters 3..... posted too
...in parts. The part of the story in the dark room are brilliantly crafted. The sex scenes with the other girls, and with Jo and her dad at home, while very well written, distracted readers from the potency of the dark room. I got so turned on every time the story came back to the dark room. Great job!
Wow I loved this story! The intensity and mystery was perfect. For the past week and a half I've been sneaking onto my husbands blackberry at night to read this story. Even when I finished I had to keep reading. Awesome attention getters through out the entire story. It covers so many fantasies and keeps the story very "real" like it could have actually happened. Mozel Tov!! And keep writing. It makes all of us Very VERY satisfied!
Fantastic story,definitely your best. Very plausible and hot fantasy with young girls in the darkroom. I was really hoping Jo would fuck him in the darkroom without her friends knowing. At least that's what I would have done ...
Wow, this story blew me away. I loved how it kept me in the dark as much as the teacher. The different scenes were great too: the students exploring each other, the teacher and his daughter at home. And it ended just the way I hoped.
This soccerdad loved the story! Arousing and well written! Would love to read more. The darkroom was the perfect place for this! It had several fantasies involved, teacher/student, young vs. older, first time, first time lesbian, and father/daughter. WELL DONE!
Wow!!! its sooooo damn amazing...read it ovr a period of 8 days, hd 2 cum evry tym!!! Fantastic, realy!!
Really, really good and well written story which I enjoyed a lot. I like the very fast cutting of the scenes it keeps the intensity up, and it also work quite well how you just focus on the essence of the story without to much fill in there.
Congratulations. I enjoyed your story about a man who by degrees loses all sense of morality and control. Pretty girls acting like the ones in your story would shatter any boundaries a man sets himself up to live by.
This was one of the best story's I've read in a long time. I loved how you built up to the moment that Dave took Jo's virginity. I cant wait to read the next chapter.
I'm a photographer myself, having dabbled in darkrooms, although alone, in the past. I still take photos of my wife, although I have no access to darkrooms, I turn my film in to a 1 hour photo developer and wonders at the reaction of the employee developing the film.......
As a photo buff myself I have spent alot of time in the dark. The fact that I know dark rooms are not totally dark didn't hurt the story for me. I read this just before bed and woke the next day still thinking about it.
Great story Nikki! You always write amazing erotica! I hope you keep it up!
this story was amzaing i came at the end a sequel would be very much appreciated ;) p.s i only wish i was allison
I am really tempted to look at my daughters differently!
but, Nikki is on my mind! love to stick my tongue in her!
yumm yumm
so hot... got me off on page 2... will continue reading till end.
For those that have requested a sequel, keep checking, I'll be posting it in the next week or two.
OMG! I loved your story. Dave got three hot virgins including his daughter! I wish i could have the same encounter with a hot teacher in the darkroom. I'm still a virgin myself and this story got me so wet, but sex with my dad would be impossible. Hopfuly there's another sequil loved your story keep writing cuz ur my fav author!!!
loved this story made me so hot could not stop reading and jerkin myself a little great story
I read this with my girl over a 2 day period and I just want to say thanks. Extremely good story and the look of pleasure on her face when she came was intense! She even begged me to finish it. :)
Took me back to the days when I was a Darkroom Supervisor at Ranks at Brentwood, there I had 4 girls working for me; I was going to say under me but that was never the case for it was always me who got their back dirty.
The mixture of the darkroom, the school girls, and Dave's daughter is scintillating! Those are some hot young women there nikki. Thanks for the story, you have a lot of great material there to expand on. Lucky Dave, three virgins!
This story was awesome, but that's what I've come to expect from you. You are easily my favorite author! This story was very hot, definitely a cliffhanger! Will you write a second chapter??
The red light is okay for using the chemicals with the prints. But when the film is removed from the cannister to be developed there can't be any light.
I thought that this story was extremely erotic. It focused on a real world situation with a sense of honesty.
give me a break! forget abt the red lights. enjoy the moment! this is so good, and long enough to last a few rounds...
dont darkrooms have red lights in them that illuminate them but dont do anything to film?
Great story make me think about my dark room at the school and if anythign happend.
Nicki, you've always been one of my favorites and this newest submission of yours was really one of your best! I thought the whole concept of sex between a teacher and students in a dark room setting was really a novel idea. Thanks for a fantastic submission. I'll be looking forward to what you do next.
I liked reading the entire story , but the chances they all took at getting caught in the act made it a bet more of a fantasy .
That was a hot story that you wrote about Jo and her father/teacher. I like other way you had her teasing her father throughout the story. I do have to agree with some of the comments about the end of the story it was quite you erotic but it seems like you cut things short with the two of them. I hope you planning at writing another chapter to this story.
Easily the most creative and erotic story I've read here and one that can be reread over and over and retain it's ability to excite.
. . . that Nikki is on my list of favorite authors. This story was clever and very, very hot. Well done!!
I have to bookmark this story and read it over and over again. This has a permanent place in my collection
Thank you and keep going!
I almost never read a story over 3 pages long but this is so well written I couldn't stop.
I definitely enjoyed it, and gave it a five. However, two things.
1)It wouldn't be a step-brother or sister produced, it would be a half-brother or sister, as there is a blood relationship. If you ever do a rewrite, you can have one of the girls correct her.
2) The ending needed improvement, as it was a bit abrupt. Of course, it does make the reader desire a second chapter.
Thanks for writing.
This was definitely a 100! I spent way too much time reading when I should have been working, but I just had to hang in until Dad and Jo got together. That scene was a good one a great climax in so many ways! Please continue to keep it up.
Totally awesome! Now I MUST go away and do the five-fingered shuffle!