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Click here"But none of it was my fault," she said. "I think I need help. Dale growing up, I knew that I wasn't pretty. I also knew that I didn't have a hot body. I realized by the time that I was eighteen that I didn't want to be alone. So to get a man, I had to use what I had. I liked sex. I liked it a lot, and I was willing to let them do whatever they wanted. It made me popular, but only with men. Women hated me.
The first guy who really got to me was Andy. He was big and strong and handsome back then. I gave him my virginity on my nineteenth birthday, and we never looked back. But after Jeff was born, Andy changed, or maybe he reverted back to the way he'd been. He started to blame me for everything. And he left me several times. He always came back when he was tired of fucking whoever he had found or when he ran out of money and needed a place to stay.
As much as I loved him, it took me a while to realize that he never felt the same about me. So over the years, when he was away for too long, I got lonely and whenever he wasn't around, I offered what I had to other men. I guess I considered it my way of getting back at him for what he was doing to me. Both of us could cheat. It gave me a feeling of power.
Then I met you, Honey. You were like a knight in shining armor. I loved you so much that it hurt. And you loved me right back. But I was frightened, Dale. I was afraid that sooner, or later you'd come to your senses and find someone like Maggie. Or you'd leave me too. So ... I cheated on you first. Maybe Andy just twisted me to the point where I didn't see any harm in it. I always gave you as much pussy as you wanted. And you were the only one I ever loved.
Of course, I could never resist Andy. If he came around, we fucked, it was that simple. I always loved you more, but he was like catnip to me. Until you caught us. The second time around, he blackmailed me. He kept telling me that he was going to tell you. I had no choice, Dale. I couldn't lose you again. And it was just sex. I only let him have what he wanted so I could have you.
Today was the worst of all, though. I had no idea that you had gotten married again. I had no idea that you had replaced me. Or that my kids had forgotten me and adopted your new wife to replace me too. I just felt alone and unloved. I felt like I didn't matter, and no one loved me. So I went out and got drunk, and those ass holes took advantage of me." I noticed then that Brenda was acting oddly.
"I want us all to go to the past, back to the beginning," she said. "I want Jeff and the girls to go back to when they were kids. No I want them to go back before that. I want to push them back into my pussy, so they can be born again. And this time I want you to be their real father. I'm going to be a better mother to them this time, and everything is going to be perfect. This time they'll be perfect little angels, and they'll look like us. Except for that evil little bitch Shannon. We're not having her again. This time we're having two boys okay?"
Just as she said that she leaned over and put her head on my shoulder. I could feel her face twitching, and I noticed that only one side of her face was moving when she talked. She was also slurring her words a lot.
I leaned over behind me and saw Shannon there. She had heard her mother's rant and was about to say something. I looked at her and silently mouthed for her to call a doctor quickly.
"I love you Dale," Brenda said softly. "Take me to bed and I'll make it really good." She was slurring her words so badly I could barely make out what she was saying.
"I love you too, Brenda," I said. "I'll carry you to bed."
I picked her up and carried her towards the emergency room.
Epilogue.
Andy pulled through. He made a full recovery, but still needed a wheelchair for the rest of his life. Brenda had a stroke. I had recognized the signs as we spoke and got her into the emergency room. The years of abuse and stress along with a lifetime of emotional upheavals simply were too much for her.
Though physically fine, except for a slight weakness on one side of her body, mentally the Brenda we all knew had left her body. She retreated into a world inside of herself. In Brenda's mind, she and I are still married, and we have three small children.
I visit her once or twice a week, and she asks me when we can go home and make more babies. She thinks that Maggie is her twin sister and warns me to watch out for her because she's sure that Maggie wants to fuck me.
Maggie and I are the only ones in the family who can visit Brenda. Whenever the kids visit her, she goes into a psychotic fit. Her mind can't accept them. Strangely enough, she has no reaction to Shannon. Shannon can stand right in front of Brenda and Brenda simply doesn't see her or acknowledge her presence. Shannon thinks it's a hoot.
Andy visits Brenda a lot. He combs her hair and feeds her. He feels a lot of guilt for how she turned out. Brenda thinks he's her brother.
Lauren and Greg are happily married with a baby on the way. Lauren works in the same pharmacy that Greg works in.
Jeff graduated with honors from a technical school. All the time that he and I spent together working on cars got to him. He wanted and got a career in automotive technology. After a few years, we plan on opening an automotive service center. He wants to specialize in performance modifications for car lovers.
Maggie and I are still very happily married. Shannon is still with us, in fact, no one was overly shocked when Shannon moved down the hall and into our room, but that's another story.
The end.
- COMMENTS
Good story although I was expecting Dale to marry Shannon, but the plot probably needed Maggie for the wedding scene.
The story was already way too long and vapid, and Andy deserved his fate. Brenda was a nutcase and had a stroke at the end. But the stuff with Shannon moving in their bedroom really jumped the shark and ruined the story. Unnecessary and grotesque. Yeesh.
Good story and well written. Dale didn’t force Lauren to invite Brenda to the wedding. It was a suggestion to Lauren. Obviously some readers are not mature enough or have been through a divorce. When you’re a parent you want the best for the bride or the groom. In this case they were correct in inviting Brenda. It’s too bad that she wasn’t involved in the planning of Lauren’s wedding but she brought it on herself.
This story reminded me of my wedding to my wife. This is a second marriage for us and we’ve been together almost 40 years. With children on both sides and dealing with your not my father and you’re not my mother. This story hit home. Some of the readers have made silly comments and I believe that the reason that they do is lack of life experiences.
Dale is the villain of this story. First he pisses on the flames of reconciliation between Brenda and Andy by playing a white knight. It’s clear Brenda loves Andy more than she does Dale, there is no evidence of it being otherwise. Dale forced Lauren to invite her emotionally abusive mother (which he knew she would bring Andy). He also wanted to rub his new woman in her face. This wimpy tendencies with his passive aggressive nature is the true toxic trait of this story.
Some really excellent writing. It seemed like Brenda's biggest flaw was not being able to say no.
Couldn't finish this. Gave up half way. I tried, really I did. But god damned if he wasn't a pissy assed wimp through out the part of the story I read.
Brenda is was all about herself, prolly a psychopath of some sort or nuther, just like andy, altho andys are a pretty frequent presence in this fucked up world. Not real happy w/ MCs faithfulness and slavish devotion to brenda. 4 stars. rk
Look in the dictionary for ‘Trailer Trash’ and you’ll find Brenda’s pictures. She may be the most delusional character on this site.
Excellent story of humans being... human.
The love, the delusion, the rationalization, the drama, the characters and their steadfastness, along with their changes, and the wrap-up, even though it is somewhat open (and not particularly conventional in at least one way), are all really well-developed and enjoyable. There is enough eroticism to support posting it here, but it emphasizes that this is properly Brenda and Dale's story.
Five for you
One serious problem, from your MC, our hero:
"There is something about watching a middle aged woman get fucked. There's something incongruous about it. You know that you're watching someone's mother, spread her legs and thrust her well used pussy back at the guy who's fucking her with everything she has. It just seems wrong."
The ONLY way that this opinion has ANY validity, is that most of these incidents are, and probably should be, PRIVATE, and seeing them is perhaps an unwelcome invasion.
Other than that, absolutely, middle-aged women are beautiful, or sexy as hell, or both, when happily being railed in their well-used pussy. It is absolutely right, when it is consensual and with the right guy.
28yr old bitch Dale marries aunty Brenda who has 3 kids, oldest 14yrs to play house and daddy. Then he cries like the wimp he is when she's caught fucking Andy. Then he gives her access to all the money he has.
If there anything worse than trailer park white trash
Fucking too long. Dale is a an original asshole who marries a 7yrs older than him woman with 3 kids. What a fucking loser. Same shit MCs
The only thing better than the ending of this story is how many readers are blowing a gasket over it. I still want a lovely Incest or Group Sex vignette with Dale, Maggie, and Shannon.
So many unhealthy relationship and so little time. I am impressed with the character development.
Fourteen pages of "The Best of Jerry Springer," but it is strong, realistic and devoid of the lazy, empty and idiotic cliche-filled writing that drowns this place like sewage on a hot summer day. This cat is one of the best ten writers on this site. Fifty bloody stars.
Yikes. How did the blackmail work? He already knew about the ex. Huh? Brenda was a maze of psychoses.
And Shannon ending up with him and Maggie ... in their bedroom? Wtf? He was a stepfather to her for years. The author's ending really killed this story.
Is it weird that I find the relationship of Dale, Maggie, and Shannon incredibly sexy? lol. For some reason their relationship seems fated and beautiful. And super hot lmao.
Brenda was definitely suffering from mental illness seemingly stemming from body issues. Her mental state continued to spiral.
Shannon moving into the bedroom with Dale and Maggie was unnecessary and creepy.
The blackmail was ridiculous. Dale knew about the ex. How did it remotely succeed? Balderdash.
How did the blackmail remotely work? Made no sense that she caved to her ex again. Whatever. She was extremely delusional.
as the author you set a world record in reinventing a character's opportunities to the tune of 18 quadrillion times in this overdose of redundancy for the characters Brenda and Andy. Seriously, i read it, but it was simply over cooked by 8 pages to go. You apparently did not have an editor or reading friend to reel you in from this insanity of dragging us through the mud that was so slimey that you could not see the other side of the quagmire/bog.
Brenda might be the most delusional wife ever in an SS06 story and that's saying something.
Normally I like longer stories from this author but this one stopped being interesting by about page 6.
Although it was too long, I loved how the kids gravitated to the Step-father, who lived them more than their mother.
SS06 has a gift for completely destroying a good story with the last sentence.
I thought Brenda was the piece of shit until the very end when Dale took the award and started doing his daughter.
I’m done with SS06.
I really enjoyed the story it was really well thought out. I do wish Brenda
got mental help and did better. I really look forward to see how things
turn out for Shannon, Maggie and Dale.
GOOD JOB
This is my 3rd or 4th read through, and it's still a great story. I love your stories with a fiery little redhead who saves him. I really hope you write more! It's been a while!
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Excellent story!
Shannon is def a pit bull, Brenda's delusional, Andy's a ???????, Dale is a paragon, Maggie is the Dog's Bollocks.
11/10!!!!!
Don’t waste your time on this. Just like the ppl in the story, author probly had a stroke while writing this
Brenda is a weak, worthless piece of shit! She should be on some street corner with a pimp who beats her daily!
The triangle with Dale, Maggie and his daughter Shannon (yes daughter though not biological) is beyond disturbing. Uggh.
What cracked me up was a 28 year old marrying a 35 year old (whose not really 35) with 3 kids 😳 like who the fuck marries some old skank with cellulite, a pot belly and flabby tits? 😂😂😂
The stuff with Dale and Maggie and his daughter Brenda (who cares about the sperm donor) is execrable.
I gave this Story 4 Stars . I still cannot believe that Shannon is living with her Dad and his wife .
Brenda could be a star on Dr. Phil or Jerry Springer. Sort of can't believe I read the whole thing.
Let you into a little secret, you’re all wasting your time posting comments here, Stang hasn’t posted on this site for five years he last modified his profile seven years ago. He ain’t listening anymore.
He’s on another site now (we all know where) and there’s another thirty odd stories since he left here, though he’s not posted anything for over a year on that site either.
Was right up with you until the last sentence. Think it would have been better if Shannon finally left the nest once mom had her stroke. Kind of surprised Dale did not "warn" Brenda about his marriage and introduce Maggie to Brenda prior to the marriage ceremony. Was clear that Brenda had some serious deficiencies and was in need of some major counseling. Dale was clearly a saint.
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I was with you 100% until Shannon moved into the master bedroom. Nicely done and creative. You should have given Maggie a nice Bentley or something like that.
I just couldn’t keep reading, slowed to a stop on page 9. The same crap from the woman and Andy, over and over and over.
Shannon loved Dale so much that she became his "mini-me," following his lead in car, collage and career. He was clearly her male parental figure and that role has great influence over how the child views self, others and the world at large. Very few things could be more destructive than to insert sexual activity into a young woman's relationship with her Dad. Shannon will make Brenda look like a paragon of mental health once the toxicity of Dale and Maggie fucking her takes hold.
After reading the first page can you all say = WHITE FUCKING TRASH? lol. Dam
Drgwng, i see you dont write anything here but comments, no stories or poems. Perhaps youre not the finest of judges of literary art. The story type wasnt really my favorite but it was well written, it moved well and was creative. Pernaps a bit more proof reading, but it showed skill that i dont have because ive never written a story or poem here ether, but i see quality in things that i can't produce myself, and to me the story line isnt all that important. Whats wrong with constructive comments? R. Bachman.
Wow, was this ever a flaming pile of poo. Easily this author's worst, I had no idea he could produce this level of crap. Also, at least ten pages too long. The Mc had to be one of the most complete idiots ever put on paper. Compared to some of this writer other work must have been on drugs when typing this. Just ridiculously bad and will force me to study muc
First time through I thought it wasnt too bad. But this time I realized how it dragged.....really dragged.
Even at that it got so damned cliched, which if those were cut out this would have been whittled it down to 9 pages.
Honestly would have been better if she was more like a real person instead of a blow up doll with the ability to talk.
The emotional impact would have been far greater for the reader if it were just Andy she was cheating with.
Speaking of Andy...you nailed 90% of the southern Republican boyz below the Mason Dixon line, talking like a tough Alpha male, while being a worthless limp dick of an Omega male. If that was your goal...good on ya, if not you ust know way more of them pantie wearing skits than you realize.
It was a 4 or 5 until that last line…..blood or not, an ongoing parent-child relationship should not ever turn sexual.
A three way with step parents? This one goes beyond normal levels of creativity. For its length. I caught very few mistakes. Cool read. Rated it 5.
Like some of the other stories. TOO much is spent of the cheating wife's story. Drags the whole story down in the gutter.
Long story but worth each and every word. I think that you have a great sense of story telling and I've just enjoyed the hell out of yet another of your tales.
Loved it and would love to read even a flash follow up with Dale, Maggie, and Shannon.
The funniest part of stories like this is these scenarios might as well be set in Narnia they are such fantasy. Isn't it interesting how ALL of these types of stories have perfect husbands, who are always sexually amazing, have great bodies for their age and the kids love them more than the wife? I want pictures and transcripts from reality. You know it's bullshit. I am not saying the men cheated first but these situations are never as one sided.
Jesus what a twisting tale, but really so good except for the ending where Shannon moves into there bedroom. That just dropped a star for me.
TOTALLY PATHETIC, AND SO IS DGHEAR FOR PRAISING THIS CRAP!
YOU HAVE COMPLETELY RUINED ANY DEGREE OF RESPECT I EVER HAD FOR YOU.
I QUIT READING ON PAGE SEVEN...
I have been reading a number of your stories and found that you are one terrific writer.
I had to stay with this story just to see how it ended. It really held my interests.
with respect
DG Hear
A great story. I really enjoyed your writings. Love to see u continue the story with Shannon and Dale.