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This is probably one of the most unpleasant stories I have read here.
The punishment outweighs the “crime”. What she fails to take into consideration is she performed the acts voluntarily and he is raped and only performs under threat of mutilation.
The marriage will never survive and he will never trust her again.
Haha, that was funny. Interesting concept. Good story! He's definitely not gonna enjoy what's next..
WTF??? She tricked him, did not even remotely fully disclose what he was choosing. Even at that, he didn't really want to do it, she pulled him into it. There is no love here to try to preserve.
I,m sorry I did get to the end but it still doesn’t feel or make any sense, but there you go, I,m not into arse play
I am glad people gave this writer shit in comments. I have stumbled upon this very late, I hope you got help.
This story is just so wrong on so many levels!
I think there are too many sensitive men that read your stories on here. I've seen way more horrendous stories but where the women are the victims and the comment section is full of praise for the author but when the shoe is on the other foot..... hahaha. Oh dear! Sensitive souls! You know you don't have to read a story that you don't like. Just saying...
FTDS has written an excellent aftermath.
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A couple of key differences with her plan:
1) She willingly having straight, if kinky, sex with her husband.
2) He is being FORCED to have gay sex with a stranger.
There is no equivalence!
The wire, which could easily permanently hurt him, yet she loves him? Yet she has no problem with having him gay raped....and it seems like the other gal was experienced in that department.
What happens if he passes out from pain, or is unable to complete the challenge like she wants?
Blood is going to be spilled one way or the other here.
You are always the same idiot!!! Your protagonists are all criminals and are all get prosecuted! Where is the logic in your crap?? Is it only your cheap lechery!!!
If he's any kind of man,she'll be hamburger meat soon after this bullshit ends! Another fuckin' twat!
She may THINK she knows him, but he is TELLING her "NO!" and she is essentially having him gay raped.
As disgusted as she might have been by what they did, at least she was WILLINGLY having STRAIGHT sex with her husband.
and a stupid loser husband. I would not hesitate in killing her slowly and very painfully. then the dike gets it and the faggot gets to die. fucking horrible pathetic crap. hope this writer dies a painful death.
If you readers need to have a decent ending check out Cpete or FTDS. Both authors put a good ending to this mess.
He should have done it commando then stuck his shit polluted dick in her.
I thought the plot quite ludicrous. A wife having her husband raped because he watched hardcore porn, what was she going to get after the event a damaged soul for a husband and/or a divorce. But the writing was very good, a writer tries to get the reader to feel involved with the characters to feel their joy or pain and you have achieved that here just by seeing the comments made. Well done.
God, I love the comments on these stories, because I don't see such hate for noncon stories when it's men pulling shit like this.
Definitely going to be checking out more stories by this author and laughing at more comments written by whiny ass men who aren't getting the "the woman loved it in the end" or "she didn't and I felt so powerful" noncon stories they want.
Also the endings of these stories are fantastic. You don't have to have a complete "everything explained" ending for it to be good.
Well I am in the minority but I liked it! Yes its not complete…have a brain and fill in the rest for yourself. I have never understood the hate that comes from people bashing others work. Maybe it hits too close to home?
Wouldn't it just be simpler to move on from a story you did not like than go ahead and bash the person for trying? It is an amateur writing site is it not? And you did read all the way thru not liking any of it?
Relax people….its one persons fantasy.
She decided that she wanted to do it. HE DIDN'T!
If she told him up front that she would DEMAND reciprocation he never would have agreed.
If he doesn't destroy the three of them he might as well yank that string himself cause he's no man I would want!
You crossed the T's and dotted the I's so, technically, this wasn't badly written. But your lack of an ending destroyed the story. When stories get rated in the 3's, they're usually pretty bad. When you get 2's, it means the story is awful. You deserved the 2. I'm giving you a single star. This was bad.
Obviously written by a fag. The "wife" chose to do it...and she's now forcing rape on the hubby. I have to assume the way this is going, hubby will be nutless and go along with it. This story could go easily in the non-consensual, or gay, or better still in the garbage, yet the rump rangers like placing stories in this category. Wonder why...
Or a Cunt who hates men. This was total shit. Nothing erotic about a mindless loser husband who has a hateful cunt wife. Unless your like the faggot Writer who gets off being a sissy.
But I give you credit for one thing. You sure know how to write nasty garbage. For a total lack of a finished product, for ridiculous actions and one of the dumbest men ever written about, I gave you a "1".
What the fuck was that? The crazy wife spied on her husbands computer and came up with this anal fetish Part 1 was heterosexual. Why is the next part homosexual? He wasn't bi so why is this part bisexual? Strange tale but I'll see it through.
Jory, Barclay, and Myra would be charged with Felony Assault, Unlawful Restraint, Coercion, Felony Sexual Assault, and Rape. Ken would be within his rights to fight back. Dayum happy that my Man ain't into that sick shit! You need help and a padded room!
No, I'm not laughing at the tale. I'm laughing at the fitting ending to it that was written in the Anonymous comment that finishes with "THE END!" Psycho-Wifey should have been in a serious hurt locker along with the gay guy and the bull lesbian by the time it was all over.
The tale itself was extremely disturbing, even more than others by you. I can only deduce that "edrider73" is either someone who hates men in general, to the point of wishing that even innocent men would be tortured, or a self-hating masochist. This one IS well written, as with the others by this author. However, it also made me nauseous to the point where I skipped ahead to the end. Well written sewage is still sewage.
1 Star.
I reached down as I felt the tug on the string and pulled the loop out enough to get my sack out. when Barclay saw that he moved over to me and tried to restrain me again. this time I was ready for him and broke his nose before he could touch me. then I punched myra in the face as hard as I could which sent her sprawling. jory was starring at me in disbelief as she saw her stupid plan go up in smoke as I reached for my phone to dial 911. when the police arrived I explained everything to them and gave them the video with me being restrained as they handcuffed Barclay, myra, and jory. they were charged with multiple counts of sexual assault and rape and I divorced the cunt while she was munching myra's rug in prison.
THE END!
he should have walked out and just divorced her once she told him what she planned out. psychotic is the word for her that comes to mind if not pathological
At first I hoped that this story was written/edited as a wake up call to men who watch/read porn that hurts or degrades women. While I was and remain horrified by this story, I recognize that many women have as little real choice/consent in performing such sex acts in real life or porn as the husband in this story.
A few days later I read the second story and learned that my original hope was unfounded. I do not understand why Literotica permits the posting of stories that titillate based on sex crimes. I don't care whether the victim is a man, a woman, or a child. Rape/sexual assault is a crime for any age.
First I would've smashed Myra's skull with the top of the toilet tank killing her instantly when we went into the bathroom. Then ol Barclay's skull would be next because he would be too surprised and shocked by seeing Myra's dead body flopping out of the bathroom as I pushed her out ahead of me. Even if he was not killed with the first blow he would be incapacitated enough that I could finish him off with subsequent blows. Then all my attention could be devoted to my screaming wife as she was bound and slowly tortured to death. These days bodies are all too easily disposed of. As far as the video goes I just hope the cameras were still running to capture all the action, because Snuff films can be sold for top dollar and I would move to a non extradition country and live happily ever after.... I think if you can have your sick fantasy, I can have mine.
that was simply horrible on so many levels I don't know where to start.
Well, statistically, odds were someone had to have liked it. However, I have rarely seen a story this widespreadly loathed
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Pure trash!...........1* fucking star because there isn't anything lower.
and she has an Attitude and knowledge. TK U MLJ LV NV
This was pretty well-written, but the plot, while original, was very far-fetched. Also, the category was wrong. Belongs in Non-consent, Fetish, BDSM, anywhere besides LW. The idea that he can't resist because he has climaxed four times is foolish. Of course, he never should have agreed to part one. But as another reader explained, his wife wanted to do it for him, so there was consent for living out his fantasies. He was never told he would undergo forced gay in return, for her entertainment. Probably the dyke's idea all along. Any normal man would fight this and file charges. Divorce goes without saying.
Really sick story posted in the wrong category. Burn the bitch and her stupid shit friends. WTF?
This is one sick story. The psychotic soon to be ex-wife is going to jail. The only redeeming aspect in chapter two would be the mayhem he causes. Agree with some other posters. Advise Barclay to leave because as soon as he gets close to his nuts they are history. What a fucking moron of a husband to even put up with video one. No one treats another person this way, much less a spouse. Less than 1 star for posting this shit in the LW category. More like bdsm or noncon. Loving wife? Not on your life. But we all know where this is going as soon as he had his chance with the dyke.
Sounded like a good story until I got to the part about the wife spying on her husband's internet activities, then blaming him for the time and money she spent for her spying. Instead of asking her husband about the sites he visited and keeping an open mind, and acting like a real pea in a pod, she goes off the deep end and hatches a payback plan for his birthday. And people wonder why the Loving Wives' category has the reputation it does.
I stopped reading before the camera started rolling. This could have been a great story. But I guess the need to prove once again on LW what a bitch the wife was, was stronger than the need to write a story where a husband and wife actually have great sex and both enjoy the husband's birthday. Maybe this is asking a writer to write about something he knows nothing about, or has no interest in. I think it's time Lit created the Loving Husbands category.
I almost stopped reading this one it is so awful. I will not read any further installments. He should have never done that to his wife and he should have really hurt Jory the first chance he had. A kick to the balls to him and then kick the piss out of Myra to get free then leave his bitch wife. Be sure to take the video so she can't counter sue and divorce her ass. I can't get over him doing those things to his wife though. He should never have been in that position to start with. Maybe he needs to be beaten and divorced also. This is just plain sick. IT REALLY DOES NOT BELONG IN LOVING WIVES. FETISH OR B&D WOULD BE BETTER.