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This is probably one of the most unpleasant stories I have read here.
The punishment outweighs the “crime”. What she fails to take into consideration is she performed the acts voluntarily and he is raped and only performs under threat of mutilation.
The marriage will never survive and he will never trust her again.
Haha, that was funny. Interesting concept. Good story! He's definitely not gonna enjoy what's next..
WTF??? She tricked him, did not even remotely fully disclose what he was choosing. Even at that, he didn't really want to do it, she pulled him into it. There is no love here to try to preserve.
I,m sorry I did get to the end but it still doesn’t feel or make any sense, but there you go, I,m not into arse play
I am glad people gave this writer shit in comments. I have stumbled upon this very late, I hope you got help.
This story is just so wrong on so many levels!
I think there are too many sensitive men that read your stories on here. I've seen way more horrendous stories but where the women are the victims and the comment section is full of praise for the author but when the shoe is on the other foot..... hahaha. Oh dear! Sensitive souls! You know you don't have to read a story that you don't like. Just saying...
FTDS has written an excellent aftermath.
//rosa-blanca.ru/desixxxphoto/s/yo-yo-chronicles-ch-01-ending
A couple of key differences with her plan:
1) She willingly having straight, if kinky, sex with her husband.
2) He is being FORCED to have gay sex with a stranger.
There is no equivalence!
The wire, which could easily permanently hurt him, yet she loves him? Yet she has no problem with having him gay raped....and it seems like the other gal was experienced in that department.
What happens if he passes out from pain, or is unable to complete the challenge like she wants?
Blood is going to be spilled one way or the other here.
You are always the same idiot!!! Your protagonists are all criminals and are all get prosecuted! Where is the logic in your crap?? Is it only your cheap lechery!!!
If he's any kind of man,she'll be hamburger meat soon after this bullshit ends! Another fuckin' twat!
She may THINK she knows him, but he is TELLING her "NO!" and she is essentially having him gay raped.
As disgusted as she might have been by what they did, at least she was WILLINGLY having STRAIGHT sex with her husband.
and a stupid loser husband. I would not hesitate in killing her slowly and very painfully. then the dike gets it and the faggot gets to die. fucking horrible pathetic crap. hope this writer dies a painful death.
If you readers need to have a decent ending check out Cpete or FTDS. Both authors put a good ending to this mess.
He should have done it commando then stuck his shit polluted dick in her.
I thought the plot quite ludicrous. A wife having her husband raped because he watched hardcore porn, what was she going to get after the event a damaged soul for a husband and/or a divorce. But the writing was very good, a writer tries to get the reader to feel involved with the characters to feel their joy or pain and you have achieved that here just by seeing the comments made. Well done.
God, I love the comments on these stories, because I don't see such hate for noncon stories when it's men pulling shit like this.
Definitely going to be checking out more stories by this author and laughing at more comments written by whiny ass men who aren't getting the "the woman loved it in the end" or "she didn't and I felt so powerful" noncon stories they want.
Also the endings of these stories are fantastic. You don't have to have a complete "everything explained" ending for it to be good.
Well I am in the minority but I liked it! Yes its not complete…have a brain and fill in the rest for yourself. I have never understood the hate that comes from people bashing others work. Maybe it hits too close to home?
Wouldn't it just be simpler to move on from a story you did not like than go ahead and bash the person for trying? It is an amateur writing site is it not? And you did read all the way thru not liking any of it?
Relax people….its one persons fantasy.
She decided that she wanted to do it. HE DIDN'T!
If she told him up front that she would DEMAND reciprocation he never would have agreed.
If he doesn't destroy the three of them he might as well yank that string himself cause he's no man I would want!
You crossed the T's and dotted the I's so, technically, this wasn't badly written. But your lack of an ending destroyed the story. When stories get rated in the 3's, they're usually pretty bad. When you get 2's, it means the story is awful. You deserved the 2. I'm giving you a single star. This was bad.
Obviously written by a fag. The "wife" chose to do it...and she's now forcing rape on the hubby. I have to assume the way this is going, hubby will be nutless and go along with it. This story could go easily in the non-consensual, or gay, or better still in the garbage, yet the rump rangers like placing stories in this category. Wonder why...
Or a Cunt who hates men. This was total shit. Nothing erotic about a mindless loser husband who has a hateful cunt wife. Unless your like the faggot Writer who gets off being a sissy.
But I give you credit for one thing. You sure know how to write nasty garbage. For a total lack of a finished product, for ridiculous actions and one of the dumbest men ever written about, I gave you a "1".