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Click hereWhat a fucking mess Holly was. Sweat and running mascara had been overlaid with dense, white goo. A thick crest of spunk dripped from her forehead down her nose. One eye was trying to prise itself open from the glue that had sealed down its lashes. Her mouth was bubbling with the stuff and great jellied gobs of it dangled from her chin. She was the picture of cum-splattered indignity. And my dick had done it all.
'Suck me clean,' I told her, and before she had a chance to wipe any semen from her face, I pushed my cum-glazed cock-head back into her mouth. She knew all too well what was expected and acted accordingly, licking up all the goodness from my still-enlarged member. 'Keep going. Mop up all that spunk like a good slut and then get me hard again.' I let her guzzle at her leisure and saw, as she lapped about me, that the phone on the sofa side-table was in reaching distance. Perfect. Placing a steadying hand on her busy head, I reached over, picked up the receiver and stabbed out eleven digits. Martin's mobile number. I let it ring three times, knowing he'd be seeing my caller ID, then set the receiver quietly down. Holly hadn't noticed a thing, so busy was she reactivating my prick. The planned signal had been sent and her double-surprise was no doubt on the way - both guys would probably be sprinting, it occurred to me in amusement, although the presumably swollen condition of their cocks would constrict their running.
I disengaged my own nicely re-stiffening member from Holly's mouth and climbed off her, nestling up close on the sofa. She seemed relieved by the break and sat up, panting heavily and scooping sperm from her right eye, so she could see properly once more. 'Can I go and get a towel?' she asked meekly, plucking at the knickers still strung around her knees with the hand that wasn't semen-smeared.
'No,' I told her, stroking her hair, and she stared back at me sorrowfully. 'You can clean up later. I like your pretty face all plastered with my cum. I like you wearing me. Now lick your fingers clean and leave the rest. You came here to be my slut and you're going to play that role to the full. Understand?' She nodded silently, and as I guided her hand to her mouth, sucked her fingers free of my congealing essence. 'And we both know you enjoyed everything that I just did to you. We both know you fucking loved it, right?'
Once again she nodded, this time with the trace of a forlorn, guilty sense of pleasure. 'Yes... Yes, I did...'
The loud knocking on the apartment door made her jump with fright. She made an instinctive move as if to cover her breasts and pussy, then seemed to relax into the thought that I surely wasn't going to invite anyone in. That was until she saw the smile on my face. I'm sure, Emily, that I was looking terribly pleased with myself. 'Go answer it, Holly,' I said quietly. 'It's for you.'
TO BE CONTINUED
ALL FEEDBACK APPRECIATED
- COMMENTS
damn you are professsional
way above to post for literotica
gonna see your kindle edition
you are a born novelist dude
love you 3000
damn that ending was scary and hot as hell such details about his dark desires ,his lust and her conflit of natural rational mind and her inner deprave dark mind yes the credit goes to her raunchy english teacher too initiate her to hard sex
as always top notched work
whats the best part is that holly secretly desires what he would do to her unlike mary jane in whst men really wants hope i am rifht with the name although i loved that too how she thought it would be just vanilla but ended up wil degrading popping out all 3 cherries of hers in just one n8 by a wolf she thought was sheep to be just thrashed at house with as much humiliation and coldness as she experienced while getting used by him
its amazing how you can mske even a simple deepthroat and pussy fuck nicely scary and sexy all at the same time
5 star dude
Wife and I read this story together.
Found it a real TURN ON
We played for hours on end, sucking and fucking , cum going every where.
Carry on with more stories like this.
Great story. I love his attitude towards her. Such a dominant, predatory bastard.
Very sexy. Lucky Holly :)
Really. Wow. I so loved this storyy still trembling from my orgazm its like one of my fantasies in hard sexual detail and the knocking on the door made me orgazm again. Wow ty so much
I really love this story. It's well-written, powerful, and I love how harsh, dirty and graphic it is. I've got a thing for girls covered in cum, with their make-up running, and I love that you've included both Holly's shame and reluctance as well as how much she wants it and enjoys it. Really well done!
The original version of the story was a little too far on the 'reluctance' scale for Lush, so while chapter one was there for a while, chapter two got banned and I withdrew the first out of politeness. I toned it all down a little, but it's still pretty hardcore. I hope you enjoy the second part, my bendy friend. ;)
This story is so hot and naughty, I see what you mean now by wanting to work for full submission. Excellent story Sir.
Question, why didn't you post this up on lush?
I really liked the story but at the beginning I'm not a fucking perverted bitch. And if I want to be anonymous then I can
I am really enjoying your stuff. Super hot! Thanks and please keep writing.
Loved it! I would write more but my fingers are too wet to type! Well done!
i came and came hard. esp when i can relate to it completely.
always have known deep down inside this is what i was born to do.
but i've never acted on it. your stories are really hot,
almost as good as the ones i play out, in my head ;)
xxx
grace
Im loving this story, but the wording does to seem a bit wordy, but overall its awesomely sexy
Only a guy could write such a fatuous comment. Are you the same spineless idiot who left the previous adjective-related Anonymous comment? Are you going to leave another one? Be my intellectually-retarded guest. But at least have the balls to put a name to your comment.
How come the Brits write such lousy porn? Along with their
food and football[soccer] they suck bigtime
...it's just that I can scarcely remember anyone leaving me a negative comment here on Literotica and NOT remaining anonymous. At least have the courtesy, if you're setting yourself up as a critic, to provide a username. Thank you.
The story started off interesting, but there are too many distracting adjectives. There are so many adjectives and double adjectives, it starts to take away from the plot and delays the action words too long. For example: "great jellied gobs of it dangled" could be "jellied gobs of it dangled." Also, "She was the picture of cum-splattered indignity," is a superfluous sentence. With some editing, I think you're story would improve tenfold.
Write more...Your style of writing had me on edge and breathless through out...waiting...
Fantastic...
how this makes me feel...like you have opened my mind and put my fantasy in black and white.
Your story made me so wet! I can't wait to read about what cums through the door for Holly next!
I love all of your stories, you know that. They are soo hot and make me sooo wet. I cannot wait for Chapter 2. I hope you make Holly go through Hell :-)
There are a few naming errors here and you are at risk for your stories becoming a bit repetitive. But I love how you put the girls through their paces and can't wait to see what is behind door number duo!
writing skill in LIT--However I have not encountered them
OMG - dont keep me waiting i loved it, poor little holly what a wonderful story.