All Comments on 'Puzzle Pieces'

Excellent start and I hope you don't put in to many twists like you always seem to do and end up losing your reader in the confusion. I like how this tale started and hope you have the next installment ready to post.

PS still waiting for the end of Two demons story or are you just going to leave it unfinished?

Cant wait to read more!!!!

I really enjoyed the beginning of this story. It is a great start and I hope that it carries on this way with not too many confusing twists. Please update soon!

I'm happy that people like this beginning, I'm already working on the second chapter it's not quite long enough the way it is now. Also Willieone about that story I'm going to be redoing it but to answer your question that version will remain unfinished. I do love my twists but it's good that they don't work I mean I need to learn how to mix twists in at some point not every untwisted story is any good. :D

Excited read thus far...great start.

"Oh no we have access to cars and what not but it's a little late and living out here where a hungry wolf or other sharp toothed wild animal can come out of nowhere you need to make the smallest amount of noise possible."

What part of this makes sense? There's wild animals around, so instead of being safe in a car, I'll take a horse drawn wagon and sit out in the open....

sorry, couldn't resist.

Yeah Myrtle, good point.

Horse+wolf = bucking panic

Automobile+wolf = road-kill